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one day ,a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read : I am blind ,please help me. A gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign , noticed only a few coin in the men's hat .He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat .And then he turned the sign over again .Wrote a new message and left .Several hours later ,the genleman returned .To his happy ,he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. He didn't expect that the new message does work,which read: It's spring now,and i can not see it
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Answer 1

one day ,a blind man was sitting on （加a或者the）street with a sign by his feet that read : I am blind ,please help me. A gentleman walked through（改为by） and stopped to have a look at the sign , noticed（改为noticing) only a few coin(改为 coins） in the men's （改为 man's) hat .He took out some bills from his wallet and put it（改为them） into the hat .And then he turned the sign over again（删除again） .Wrote a new message and left .Several hours later ,the genleman returned .To his happy （改为delight或者happiness）,he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. He didn't expect that the new message does（改为did） work,which read: It's spring now,and（改为but） i can not see it

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Answer 2

第1排：sitting on the street
第2排：walked by; noticed改成noticing; coin加s
第3排：men's 改成man's；it改成them
第4排：again去掉
第5排：happy改成happiness；does改成did
最后一排：and改成but

楼上那个the hat almost——the hat was almost 这个was不加也是对的，不用改。
第三排那个因为前面是 bills 复数，所以要 it改them

Answer 3

1.was sitting on [a] street
2.feet----foot
3.through----by
4.noticed----noticing
5.coin----coins
6.put it into---them
7.sign over again ----去掉again
8.happy ----happiness
9.10.didn't expect ----hadn't expected

Answer 4

street——the ^street walked through——walked by noticed——noticing a few coin——a few coins the men's——the man's over again——over happy——happyness the hat almost——the hat was almost does——did and——but