Question

跪求英语达人翻译本人留学的个人简历 急用 回答好的加分 用翻译器的算了

我叫XXX来自中国河南省安阳市，我今年21岁。我出生于一个幸福的家庭，家里就我一个孩子，所以我从小就过着衣食无忧的生活。
教育经历：在1997年我在XXX小学就读 2003年我在XXX初中就读 2006年我在XXX高中就读 2009年我在XX大学就读
兴趣爱好：我喜欢打篮球，曾经是学校校队的一员
个人目标：我希望能够去美国学习，因为美国的教育事业都是非常人性化，非常完美的，并且我希望自己能够顺利进入贵校，并且以优异的成绩完成学业，然后再进行更高一层次的教育。希望能在美国得到博士学位。然后可以为人类，为社会尽一份自己的责任和力量。

Answer 1

My name is XXX and I come from Anyang City, Henan Province, China. I'm twenty-one years old now. I have a harmonious family. Since I am the only child, I get all my parents' attentions.
Education Background: 2009-2011, XX University. 2006-2009, XXX High School. 2003-2009 XXX Middle School. 1997-2003 XXX Primary School.
Personal Interest: I love to play basketball and I'm used to be one of the school team members.
Personal Goals: I am willing to go abroad to the USA and have my further study done there for its humane managements and advanced teaching methods. I do hope that I can have the access to your uninversity and get a PhD degree. Then I will use what I have learned to contribute to society and humankind.
纯手工翻译，希望楼主采纳。

追问

感觉是不是有点短啊 高人 要不您看看再怎么加一些段落或者句子来扩充下 我给你加分 我真的急用而且必须要好 否则真的就死定了

追答

那你得多提供一些信息，最好是跟你申请的学校和专业有关的信息。比如你是学什么专业的？有什么这方面的特长？参加过什么比赛？得过那些荣誉？有没有什么社会服务（很重要）？你比别人的优势在哪里？

追问

哦 那就加上
获得荣誉：在大学获得过 国家励志奖学金 河南省优秀三好学生 河南省优秀毕业生等称号

在个人爱好一栏中加入 喜欢经营管理 曾经在大学期间尝试着做过一些市场类调查和市场营销

追答

Prizes: National Encouragement Scholarship and excellent graduates during the college time; Merit student of Henan Province during high school

Personal Interest: I have learned management and launched some sorts of market research and marketing campains.

Answer 2

My name is XXX anyang city henan province from China, I this year is 21 years old. I was born in a happy family, the home I a child, so I grew up a fullness of life. Education experience: in 1997 I in XXX elementary school in 2003 I in XXX at junior high school in 2006 I in XXX high schools in 2009 I in XX university Hobbies: I like to play basketball, school once a member of the school team Personal goal: I hope I can go to study in the United States, because America's education business are very human, very perfect, and I hope that I can get to your school, and excellent grades finish school, and then a higher level of education. Hope to get doctor degree in the United States. Then can of humanity, do our part for the society responsibility and power.

Answer 3

国的教育事业都是非常人性化，非常完美的，并且我希望自己能够顺利进入贵校，并且以优异的成绩完成学业，然后再进行更高一层次的教育。希望能在美国得到博士学位。然后可以为人类，为社会尽一份