Question

汉语翻译为英语！！！求助

"2010年4月14日07时49分,青海省玉树地区发生地震,地震震级为711级,震源深度为14km,震中位于玉树县结古镇附近,震害是沿着活动断裂呈带状分布,断层在地下破裂长度约60km,其中露出地表的地震断层长度为1917km,穿过州政府所在地结古镇,地震烈度达到了9 度。经初步调查,此次玉树地震波及的范围约3 万km2 ,主要造成玉树县和称多县部分地区受灾,极重灾区约900km2 ,主要集中在结古镇,重灾区面积约4 000km2 。为进一步明确房屋在地震中的倒塌破坏情况,进而指导抗震设计,从建筑结构倒塌破坏现状调查与分析出发,得出了一些值得思考的建议。"
这一段谁帮我翻译下，我要做个不是很正式的报告，这段要搞成英语，我英语太差弄不来，求高手帮忙弄，不用太标准基本翻译对就行。大家帮帮忙吧！！！！！
大家等等，我找个人看下在选最佳答案，我英语不行不知道，不过后边那两个好像是一样的啊

Answer 1

On April 14, 2010, an earthquake occurred at 07：49am in Yushu area, Qinghai province, with magnitude of 711 and focal depth of 14km. The epicenter is located around Jiegu Town, Yushu County. The earthquake damage shows a belt type distribution along the active fault zone and the rupture length under ground fault is about 60km. The earthquake fault, which exposed the earth surface and across the Jiegu Town where the local government is located, lengthens 1917km and the earthquake intensity reached 9 degrees. After preliminary investigation, the scope of the Yushu earthquake affected about 30,000 km2, mainly caused damages to some areas in Yushu and Chengduo County. The seriously destroyed area is about900km2, mainly focused on Jiegu Town, and the hardest-hit area is about 4 000km2. To further clarify the house-collapse in the earthquake and thus guide the seismic design for earthquake proofing construction, some suggestions that worth considering were drawn from the investigation and analysis of the current destroy and collapse situation of the architectural construction.

Answer 2

" Seven forty-nine on April 14, 2010, Qinghai Province, Yushu earthquake, magnitude 711 earthquake, focal depth of 14km, the epicenter is located in Yushu County near Jiegu, damage along active faults in the underground zonal distribution, fault rupture length of about 60km, which reveal the surface seismic tomography of length 1917km, through the state seat of government in Jiegu, seismic intensity of 9 degrees. After preliminary investigation, the Yushu earthquake affected a range of about 30000 km2, the main cause of Yushu county and parts of said County heavy hit disaster, about 900km2, mainly concentrated in the town of Jiegu, heavy disaster area of about 4 000km2. In order to further clarify the housing collapse in the earthquake, and then guide the seismic design of building structure collapse, from investigation and analysis of the current situation sets out, get some food for thought. "

Answer 3

下面其他的翻译都是翻译器翻译的，读起来胡乱一气，上联不对下联，驴唇不对马嘴。
我给你翻译了，我把以前那位学生的翻译我给你修改了一下，确实有很多不对的地方。
翻译修改文章以下：
7:49, April 14th, 2010, Yushu, Qinghai had an earthquake. The earthquake magnitude has reached 7.11 with focus depth of 14 km. The epifoucs located near Jiegu , Yushu. The damage apeared to be zonal distribution. The falut is 60 km long under the ground and 1917 km long on the ground. It acrossed Jiegu where the government located.The earthquake intensity reached 9 degree. After preliminary investigation, the area that has been affected by the earthquake is about 30000 km2 including Yushu and Chengduo. About 900km2 area which is mainly in Jiegu was seriously damaged and aobut 4000km2 area were in bad condition. We have got some suggestions worth thinking about when we try to figure out the damage situation of the epifocus for guidance of aseismatic desing.

Answer 4

我是英语专业学生，大致给你翻译了一下，因为时间有限，可能有不完善的地方！
我真是晕倒，那个自称改了我的文章的人真是求分心切啊，胡乱骗人，我读了一遍，完全没有任何改动…………照抄我的还不脸红！！
7:49, April 14th, 2010, Yushu, Qinghai had an earthquake. The earthquake magnitude has reached 7.11 with focus depth of 14 km. The epifoucs located near Jiegu , Yushu. The damage apeared to be zonal distribution. The falut is 60 km long under the ground and 1917 km long on the ground. It acrossed Jiegu where the government located.The earthquake intensity reached 9 degree. After preliminary investigation, the area that has been affected by the earthquake is about 30000 km2 including Yushu and Chengduo. About 900km2 area which is mainly in Jiegu was seriously damaged and aobut 4000km2 area were in bad condition. We have got some suggestions worth thinking about when we try to figure out the damage situation of the epifocus for guidance of aseismatic desing.