Question

求助,英语达人再进,翻译问题

帮我看一下有没有地方需修改...
We have received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently. Unexpently we found that the artwork was broken badly. We are not sure if you can fix it , please find the attachment of the photos for your refrence. If you still need the actual sample for the artwork, please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible.

Answer 1

◆以下分句修改较容易参照对比：
We have received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently.
===We received the artwork of Mr.Liu days ago.

Unexpently we found that the artwork was broken badly.
===Unfortunately,we found that the artwork was badly damaged.

We are not sure if you can fix it , please find the attachment of the photos for your refrence.
===We wonder if you're able to fix it, please find the attachment of the photos for your reference.（原“refrence”拼字有误）

If you still need the actual sample for the artwork, please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible.
===If you do need the sample itself for the artwork, please tell us the shipping information so that we can arrange the shipment ASAP. Thanks! （注意前面用了"us"后面的主语就要用"we"而不是“I”，才能一致）

Answer 2

我们最近收到了刘先生的艺术品。 出乎意外的是我们发现艺术品破损得相当厉害。我们不知道您能否加以修复。现附上相片供您参考。如果您仍然需要艺术品的实样，请告诉我们您的运输信息，我将尽快安排发货。

Answer 3

We have received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently. Unexpently we found that the artwork was badly broken . We are not sure whether you can fix it , please find the attachment of the photos for your refrence. If you still need the actual sample of the artwork, please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible。

Answer 4

We received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently. Unfortunately,we found that the artwork is broken badly. We are not sure if you can fix it , please find the attached photoes for your refrence. If you still need the actual sample for the artwork, please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible.

Answer 5

We received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently. Unexpently we found that the artwork was broken badly. We are not sure if you can fix it , please find the attachment of the photos for your REFERENCE. If you still need the actual sample for the artwork, please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible.

Answer 6

我们最近收到了刘先生的艺术品。出乎我们的意料 ，该艺术品已经严重破损。 我们不知道你是否可以把它粘好。请找到附件里的照片，你可以作参考。 如果您仍然需要该艺术品的话，请告诉我们运输信息，我可以尽快安排发货。
原文有错误，unexpectedly,不是unexpently