Question

语法分析问题。

If only I were a poet so that,with all the sweet and beautiful words at my command,I could sing of the grandeur of Peiping in as longing a note as that of a cuckoo!张培基翻译的老舍的文章，意思明白，但后半句（...I could sing of the grandeur of Peiping in as longing a note as that of a cuckoo!）不太理解，求大神帮忙分析下一下语法成分。

Answer 1

I sing of Peiping成分为 主语+ 动词 + 宾语。
修饰成分有
1）the grandeur of 做定语修饰Peiping.
2）in as longing a note as that of a cuckoo 做状语修饰sing of.
sing of歌颂， 后面加in 表示以什么样的曲调。in as longing a note as that of a cuckoo 像杜鹃似的啼出。

Answer 2

这是把汉语翻译成了英语
汉语原文是
真愿成为诗人，把一切好听好看的字都浸在自己的心血里，像杜鹃似地啼出北平的俊伟。
If only I were a poet so that,with all the sweet and beautiful words at my command,I could sing of the grandeur of Peiping in as longing a note as that of a cuckoo!

前半句条件句有问题
后面主句 谓语是could sing of
宾语是the grandeur of Peiping
in as longing a note as that of a cuckoo是介词短语作方式状语!
其中 a note是介词宾语of a cuckoo是定语
as longing 是定语 as that是状语修饰as longing

Answer 3

note翻译成“语调”，in a note 就是以这样的方式
译成“音符”的话和long这个动作搭配就很奇怪。

in a note as longing as that of a cuckoo