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求好心人帮忙、看下下面有哪些语法、时态错误的帮我指点下 谢谢 高分

求好心人帮忙、看下下面有哪些语法、时态错误的帮我指点下 谢谢 高分悬赏！Dear Sir/Madam,
I reply to your advertisement in today’s newspaper for an accountant, I am writing to apply for the post.
My name is Rainie, I am 24 years of age and have two years’ experience in receptionist and secretary.
I graduated from Shenzhen University with a major in Business English, I have mastered English listening，speaking，writing and reading skills. I can speak Italian fluently, because I have lived in Rome for some time.
In addition, I am very familiar with the office software, but also very accustomed to use the computer office.
I should require a salary of 4,500 a month to begin with. My reason for leaving my present employment is simple because I see no chance advancement and the company is far from my mother's house, I can't take good care of my mother.
I would appreciate your considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Rainie,

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,
I have replied to your advertisement in today's newspaper for an accountant, I am writing to apply for the post.
My name is Rainie, I am 24 years old and I have two years of experience in reception and secretary.
I graduated from Shenzhen University with a major in Business English, I have mastered English listening, speaking, writing and reading skills. I also can speak Italian fluently, because I have lived in Rome for some time.
In addition, I am very familiar with the office software.
后面这句我删掉了 意思重复了 之前提到了familar就等于经常用office。
I 'm asking a salary of 4,500 a month to begin with. My reason for leaving my present employment is simple because I don't see potential of the company and it is far away from my mother's house, which is a problem for me to take good care of my mother.
I would appreciate you considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Rainie,

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谢谢 还有没有确实我语法不好！

Answer 2

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