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LastSundaymoening,whenIwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome,Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilm...
Last Sunday moening ,when I was having a walk in the park near my home ,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor .I didn't have my camera with me at time ,but I rushed back home to get .Unfortunately ,by the time I got back ,they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen everywhere .I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building .He was right there in the front of me .I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him ,but he signed his name on my shirt.
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Last Sunday moening ,when I was having a walk in the park near my home ,I came across a crew make(making) a new film with one of my favorite actor (actors).I didn't have my camera with me at (that)time ,but(so) I rushed back home to get (it) .Unfortunately ,by the time I got back ,they have (had)finished the scene and (the)actor couldn't be seen everywhere (anywhere).I was really disappointing (disappointed)and about to leave when he walked out (of)a building .He was right there in the(the去掉) front of me .I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had(have) my photo taken with him ,but he signed his name on my shirt.
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Last Sunday moening(morning) ,when I was having a walk in the park near my home ,I came across a crew make(making) a new film with one of my favorite actor(actors) .I didn't have my camera with me at(that) time ,but(so) I rushed back home to get .Unfortunately ,by the time I got back ,they have(had) finished the scene and(the) actor couldn't be seen everywhere(ahywhere) .I was really disappointing(disappointed) and about to leave when he walked out a building .He was right there in the(/) front of me .I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him ,but he signed his name on my shirt.
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