Question

英文高手请进帮忙

开学了要参加一个英语演讲比赛，内容是杨澜的申奥演讲稿，我自己写了个开场白，请各位帮我改改~比如时态啊，语法什么的~
I think every Chinese should remember 2008. Because we held the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing. It was the pride of China and every Chinese. As we can see, after the Beijing Olympic Games, there are more and more foreigners want to go to China and work here. So we can see,how important the Olympic is and how lucky we are. We could get this chance, one important reason is that yanglan gave people in Moscow a perfect speech 11 years ago. …………

Answer 1

I think every Chinese should remember the year of 2008. Because we held the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing. All of us are proud of it. As we can see, after holding the Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners love to go to China and work here. It's a good chance for China to develop its tourism and economy.One important reason is that Yang Lan gave people in Moscow a perfect speech 11 years ago.
只是稍作改动，因为不清楚你到底写什么内容。。。如果有提纲的话会容易点。

追问

杨澜申奥的稿子网上有

追答

稿子有是有，但是你具体要写什么呢？给个提纲这样会更有重点。

Answer 2

I think every Chinese should remember the year of 2008. Because we have held the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing. It was the pride of China and every Chinese. As we can see, after the Beijing Olympic Games, there are more and more foreigners want to go to China and work here. So we can see,how important the Olympic is and how lucky we are. We could get this chance because YangLan gave people in Moscow a perfect speech 11 years ago. …………