Question

一篇英语作文，求英语大神

Answer 1

My
name
is
Yuan
Li
and
I
live
at
ShangHai.
As
we
all
know,
ShangHai
is
a
busy,
crowded
city.
It
is
very
difficult
for
me
to
travel
to
school
everyday.
I
go
to
the
school
by
riding
the
public
buses.
The
public
buses
are
very
convenient,
yet
there
are
places
that
could
be
improved.
It
would
be
great
if
the
buses
are
not
as
crowded,
so
I
wish
that
the
public
buses
could
rotate
more
often.
If
there
are
more
buses
out
there,
the
buses
would
not
be
as
crowded
as
it
already
is,
and
the
rate
of
people
running
late
to
their
destinations
can
decrease.
我写了你坐公车去上学。然后公车都很挤。所以解决方法就是让一些公车出来，然后就不会挤，而且可以快点到达目的地了。（我中文的表达能力不是很好）