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Oneday,adogwassleepinginfrontofahouse.Awolfpassedbybutsawhim.Thewolfwantedtohavethedo... One day,a dog was sleeping in front of a house.A wolf passed by but saw him.The wolf wanted to have the dog foe dinner.The dog asks the wolf not to eat him."I am very thin.A little days later,my owner will hold his wedding.At wedding,I will eat as much as I can become fatter.Then you will have more meats to eat,right?"the dog said.The wolf thought the dog was wrong.A couple of days later,the wolf came to the house again.But the wolf found the dog in the roof.he asked them to come down.The dog said,"Next time you see me sleeping in frontof the house,don't let me to go." 展开
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有一天,狗在房前睡觉。一只狼从此经过,看到了狗。这只狼要拿狗来填肚皮。狗请求狼不要吃它。狗说:“我太瘦了。过些日子,我的主人举办婚礼。到时候我多吃多喝就胖起来了。那你不就有更多肉可吃了吗?”狼对此信以为真。几天过去了,狼又来到这幢房前。可狼却发现,狗原来在房顶上。狼要它下来,狗说:“下次我在房前睡觉的时候可别再让我跑了”。
1..A wolf passed by but saw him.连词but 不当,原句是顺承结构,不是转折结构
改A wolf passed by and saw him。
2.The wolf wanted to have the dog foe (原文打字错误,应为for)dinner. for本义“误认为”
改 The wolf wanted to have the dog as dinner.把…作为,应用as,而非for。
3.The dog asks the wolf not to eat him asks改为asked。时态错误
4.I am very thin 改I am too thin省略性的too … to结构,(太瘦吃不得)
5..A little days later错了两处。.再过…时间 ,用on。a little修饰不可数名词,a few 修饰可数名词
改On a few days,
6.At wedding,I will eat as much as I can become fatter.
as much as I can 尽可能多,so that 从而,致使。到时候我多吃多喝就胖起来了,显然是因果关系句。
改At wedding,I will eat much so that I can become fatter.
7.Then you will have more meats to eat,right?"两处。问行吗,用ok。,right正确的,与语境不合。meat不可数。
改Then you will have more meat to eat,ok?"
8.The wolf thought the dog was wrong.狼认为,狗犯了错误。
改How the wolf thought the dog was wrong.狼错误地认识了狗的意图。How the wolf thought the dog (狼对狗的理解状态)
9.don't let me to go
改don't let me go. let,help,see,watch,make,observe,等特殊动词接不定式结构的宾语补足语,必用简单不定式(无to)。
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One day,a dog was sleeping in front of a house.A wolf passed by AND saw him.The wolf wanted to have the dog foe dinner.The dog ASKED the wolf not to eat him."I am very thin.A little days later,my owner will hold his wedding.At wedding,I will eat as much as I can TO become fatter.Then you will have MUCH MEAT to eat,right?"the dog said.The wolf thought the dog was RIGHT.A couple of days later,the wolf came to the house again.But the wolf found the dog in the roof.he asked HIM to come down.The dog said," THE Next time you see me sleeping in frontof the house,don't let me 此处to 删掉 go."
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