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Plenty people like to travel by car.you can make your own timetable.You can travel three or four hundreds miles or only one hundred miles a day just as if you like.You can stop whatever you wish.If there is everything interesting to see,you can stop and see it.If there is the good restaurant,you can stop and enjoy a good meal.If you are tiring,you can stop at a hotel to sending the night.If you want to travel in business,you can take a train or a plane because it is much faster to travel in this way.
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Plenty people like to travel by car. You can make your own timetable. ——无错。(很多人喜欢驾车旅行,你可以制定自己的时间表。)
You can travel three or four (hundreds) miles or only one hundred miles a day —— hundred 属于单位名词,不能用复数形式。(你一天可以走三四百英里或一百英里,)
just as (if) you like. ——as if 表示“好像/如同…一样”,去掉 if,改为 just as you like。(正如你喜欢的那样。)
You can stop (whatever) you wish. ——whatever [无论什么] 改为 wherever [无论在任何地方]。 (你可以在你希望的任何的地方停下来)。
If there is (everything) interesting to see, you can stop and see it. ——条件从句中要用 anything(如果有任何感兴趣的东西要看,你可以逗留下来看它。)
If there is (the) good restaurant, you can stop and enjoy a good meal. ——restaurant 属于第一次提到,the 改为不定冠词 a。(如果有一家好的餐馆,你可以停下来享受一顿美餐)。
If you are (tiring), ——现在分词 tiring [引起疲劳的] 表示事物的特征,改为表示人所处状态的过去分词 tired [疲劳的]。(如果你感到劳累,)
you can stop at a hotel to (sending) the night. ——改为不定式 to send 或 to pass 作目的状语。(你可以逗留在饭店过夜。)
If you want to travel (in) business, ——因公/出差要用 on business。(如果你想因公旅行,)
you can take a train or a plane because it is much faster to travel in (this) way. ——it 指代火车或飞机,用in this way [以这种方式] 与 it 语义重复,改为 in a way [在某种程度上]。(你可以乘火车或飞机,因为这样在某种程度上旅行速度要快得多。)
注:原文中用括号标注的词汇为错误,每句破折号后面为错误原因,括号中的汉语为参考译文。
You can travel three or four (hundreds) miles or only one hundred miles a day —— hundred 属于单位名词,不能用复数形式。(你一天可以走三四百英里或一百英里,)
just as (if) you like. ——as if 表示“好像/如同…一样”,去掉 if,改为 just as you like。(正如你喜欢的那样。)
You can stop (whatever) you wish. ——whatever [无论什么] 改为 wherever [无论在任何地方]。 (你可以在你希望的任何的地方停下来)。
If there is (everything) interesting to see, you can stop and see it. ——条件从句中要用 anything(如果有任何感兴趣的东西要看,你可以逗留下来看它。)
If there is (the) good restaurant, you can stop and enjoy a good meal. ——restaurant 属于第一次提到,the 改为不定冠词 a。(如果有一家好的餐馆,你可以停下来享受一顿美餐)。
If you are (tiring), ——现在分词 tiring [引起疲劳的] 表示事物的特征,改为表示人所处状态的过去分词 tired [疲劳的]。(如果你感到劳累,)
you can stop at a hotel to (sending) the night. ——改为不定式 to send 或 to pass 作目的状语。(你可以逗留在饭店过夜。)
If you want to travel (in) business, ——因公/出差要用 on business。(如果你想因公旅行,)
you can take a train or a plane because it is much faster to travel in (this) way. ——it 指代火车或飞机,用in this way [以这种方式] 与 it 语义重复,改为 in a way [在某种程度上]。(你可以乘火车或飞机,因为这样在某种程度上旅行速度要快得多。)
注:原文中用括号标注的词汇为错误,每句破折号后面为错误原因,括号中的汉语为参考译文。
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Plenty (1加of)people like to travel by car.you can make your own timetable.You can travel three or four hundreds (2去掉s)miles or only one hundred miles a day just as if (去掉if)you like.You can stop whatever (改成wherever)you wish.If there is everything (改成anything)interesting to see,you can stop and see it.If there is the (改成a)good restaurant,you can stop and enjoy a good meal.If you are tiring(改成tired),you can stop at a hotel to sending (改成spend)the night.If you want to travel in (改成on)business,you can take a train or a plane because it is much faster to travel in (去掉in)this way.
Plenty (1加of)people like to travel by car.you can make your own timetable.You can travel three or four hundreds (2去掉s)miles or only one hundred miles a day just as if (去掉if)you like.You can stop whatever (改成wherever)you wish.If there is everything (改成anything)interesting to see,you can stop and see it.If there is the (改成a)good restaurant,you can stop and enjoy a good meal.If you are tiring(改成tired),you can stop at a hotel to sending (改成spend)the night.If you want to travel in (改成on)business,you can take a train or a plane because it is much faster to travel in (去掉in)this way.
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