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英文改错,菜鸟求助!~!

英文改错奇烂,望高手指点迷津~~附上几份作业,还望笑解^^!!
(不一定有错,有的话请帮忙指正)
1 in recent years,academic achievement becomes the most important sign of success in many cultures.as a result,competition among students and among their parents has increased.

2they often are playing loud music while i am trying to study.

3even though the family stucture has changed in recent years,the basic duties of a family have stayed the same for many,many years.

Thank you very much!!!

Answer 1

competition has increased.竞争越来越激烈是用 has become more and more fierce/brutal.

they often are playing 改成they often play

stayed the same for many many years这里感觉意思上有点奇怪，你说for a long time 就可以了，你的英语不菜，没太大语法错误。只是写得不是很地道而已。

Answer 2

1 in(In) recent years,academic achievement(s) becomes(have become) the most important sign of success in many cultures.as a result,competition(s) among students and among their parents has(have) increased.

2they often are(删除) playing(play) loud music while i am trying to study.

3even though the family stucture has changed in recent years,the basic duties of a family have stayed（改称will stay） the same for many,many years(可以换成for ever).

还有就是你的大小写，自己改一下*_*

Answer 3

1. in recent years,academic achievement becomes the most important sign of success in many cultures(改为countries).as a result,competition among students and among(去掉) their parents has increased.

2.they often are(are 和 often 换位) playing loud(loudly) music(loudly 和 music 换位) while i am trying to study.

3.even though the family stucture has(去掉) changed in recent years,the basic duties of a family have stayed the same for many,many years.
另外注意大小写.

Answer 4

1. the 改成 a

2.then are often playing loud music while I am trying to study.

often应该放在are 的后面。

3.a 改成the

Answer 5

1 In recent years,academic achievement becomes the most important sign of success in many cultures.As a result,competition among students and their parents has increased.

2 They are often playing loud music whenever I am trying to study.

3Even though the family stucture has changed in recent years,the basic duties of a family have been staying the same for many years.

You are welcom.