Question

请帮我看下有没有语法错误，也可以提改进意见，求速度，谢谢！@

VCT(voluntary counseling and testing) is an effected way to prevent the transmission of AIDS ,which has been recognized by mang countries and international organizations. Survies show that thoes people who live with HIV ( like sex workers , injecting drug users)are beneficial through VCT. Though VCT is adopted in mang areas today, more support is still needed to expand the programme. The expansion is still faced with a number of problems. In short, with the effort of those people who commited to help control this disease, VCT could effectively help prevent and care for AIDS.

Answer 1

第一句中“effected”改为“effective”, 第二句many写错 ，第三句those写错.'more support is''应改为“more supports are” ,help 后的control 改为controling

Answer 2

VCT(voluntary counseling and testing) is an effective way to prevent the transmission of AIDS ,Which has been recognized by mang countries and international organizations. Several investigations show that those people who live with HIV ( like sex workers , injecting drug users)have benefit from VCT. Though VCT have adopted in mang areas now, more and more indorsations are still needed to expand on this programme. The expansion is still facing with a number of problems. In short, with the effort of those people who commited to help control this disease, VCT could help people to prevent and cure AIDS effectively.
错误太多，另外本人水平也有限，只能改道这个程度了。