Question

英语短文改错题

Dear tom
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you may other feel lonely.That's why you are new here and people don't konwabout you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below.
First,you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters.At the same time,never fail to listening to other people's views.Sencond,you should learn your classmates'likes and dislikes.Only in this way can you be able to get to konw more different people and show them that you are actually very friendlly.Last but not least,I will always ready to help you.We can take part in some sctivities together,when can intorduce you to other.
As time going on,people will konw you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
peter
这是一道标准高中改错题，总共有十个错，求各位英语大神给小弟解答

Answer 1

Dear tom
I know there is a trouble for you to communicate with others,and you may often feel lonely.That's because you are new here and people don't know about you.But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below.
First,you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters.At the same time,never fail to listen to other people's views.Sencond,you should learn your classmates'likes and dislikes.Only in this way can you be able to get to konw more about different people and show them that you are actually very friendlly.Last but not the least,I will always be ready to help you.We can take part in some sctivities together,when can intorduce you to the others.
As time goes by,people will konw you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
peter

Answer 2

1、have -is
2、can -could
3、advices不可数 去掉s
4、why-because
5、a-an
6、listening -listen
7、learn 后加about
8、will 后加be（倒数第四行）
9、other-others（倒三行）
10、on-by as time goes by表示随着时间的流逝

sctivities应该是拼写错误activities
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Answer 3

trouble 加s
other feel lonely --去掉other或改成often
why 换成because
advices 去掉s
take an active part
listening---listen
ready 前加be
sctivities拼写错误?
when can---then I can
to other --to others
as time goes by

Answer 4

同学，BZ的吧。其他的呢，同求啊

Answer 5

other feel lonely-----feel lonely too if only------only if