Question

请帮我改改下面的语法错误，拜托拜托

一、语法错误

　　（一）句子结构错误
　　1． 主从句叠置
　　1) There are more and more students like to use the computer.
　　2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved.
　　2． 简单句叠置
　　I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
　　3． 从句叠置
　　As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
　　4． 句子成分缺失
　　If work hard, we will surely be successful.
　　5． 语序错误
　　1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?
　　2) I often wonder where have they got their money.
　　（二）动词错误
　　1．时态错误
　　Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future.
　　2．语态错误
　　1) I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.
　　2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.
　　3．单复数错误
　　1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.
　　2) Someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future.
　　4．非谓语动词错误
　　1) Let me to represent everyone to say “hello” to you.
　　2) Do exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.
　　3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.
　　（三）代词错误
　　1) We can use computers in doing everything you like.
　　2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.
　　（四）冠词错误
　　1) Horse is an useful animal.
　　2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004.
　　（五）词性错误
　　1) I wish you can consider my suggests.
　　2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.

　　二、用词错误
　　1) Students must know how to apply a computer.
　　2) People can touch many new things on the Internet.
　　3) The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.

　　三、表达习惯错误
　　1) Why generated so large a change?
　　2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer.
　　3) A room often lives 6-8 students.
　　4) I think this great change has three reasons.
　　5) The prices of the food are too expensive.
　　6) The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.

　　四、标点符号及大小写错误
　　1) However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.
　　2) The man was racing down the street. Because he was late for the class.
　　3) At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much.
　　4) My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.
　　The best English film in my eyes is《Forrest Gump》.

Answer 1

（一）句子结构错误
　　1． 主从句叠置
　　1) There are more and more students (加who )like to use the computer.
　　2) There are still many problems (加that )should be noted and resolved.
　　2． 简单句叠置
　　I like chatting on line very much, (加so) I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
　　3． 从句叠置
　　As is known to all that (省略that)computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
　　4． 句子成分缺失
　　If (we) work hard, we will surely be successful.
　　5． 语序错误
　　1) Why(加do) college students spend more and more time on the computer?
　　2) I often wonder where have they( they与have交换位置） got their money.
　　（二）动词错误
　　1．时态错误
　　Many people thought(改为think) that the Internet will be more useful in the future.
　　2．语态错误
　　1) I have（加been) excited several days at the news that you will come here.
　　2) Most of the students satisfy (改为are satisfied)with the service in the dining hall.
　　3．单复数错误
　　1) Wise man seek (seeks)opportunities rather than wait for them.
　　2) Someone are (is)afraid that computer may control men in the future.
　　4．非谓语动词错误
　　1) Let me to (去掉to)represent everyone to say “hello” to you.
　　2) Do (Doing)exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.
　　3) (We )Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.
　　（三）代词错误
　　1) We can use computers in doing everything you( we) like.
　　2) A college student should be able to do their (his)washing on their own.
　　（四）冠词错误
　　1) (A)Horse is an useful animal.
　　2) The exam will be held in the (去掉the)December, 2004.
　　（五）词性错误
　　1) I wish you can consider my suggests(suggestion).
　　2) If a person wants to success(succeed), he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.

　　二、用词错误
　　1) Students must know how to apply (use )a computer.
　　2) People can touch( meet) many new things on the Internet.
　　3) The purpose of this letter is to react ( reflect )some opinions on the service in the dining hall.

　　三、表达习惯错误
　　1) Why generated so large a change? -why was there so large a change?
　　2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer. --Now a P4computer is only worth 6000yuan
　　3) A room often lives 6-8 students. ----6-8 students live in a room
　　4) I think this great change has three reasons--I think there are three reasons for this great change.
　　5) The prices of the food are too expensive.- The price of the food is too high
　　6) The reason for this is because (改为that)some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.

　　四、标点符号及大小写错误
　　1) However, every coin has two sides, (。）I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.
　　2) The man was racing down the street. Because （ because) he was late for the class.
　　3) At last I want to let you know, ( 去掉逗号）I love our university very much.
　　4) My favorite sports are swimming、（，）jogging、（，）mountaineering and playing table tennis.
　　The best English film in my eyes is《Forrest Gump》.（去掉《》）

Answer 2

liking being // I like chatting on the line so much that I go to the net bar almost every weenkend.//
that替换成逗号 //
If we work hard //Why do //where they have got
think //
have been // are satisfied
men // is
? //Doing // Having been
to do // ?
a // (the)
suggestions // succeed
use //

Answer 3

1) More and more students like to use the computer.
2) There are still many problems to be noted and resolved.
It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
Many people thought that the Internet would be more useful in the future.
If we work hard, we will surely be successful.