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I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school.i feel uneasily recently.at home i feel like prisoner.i am not allowed to watch tv or surf the internet.the only thing i have to do it is studying.every time i got a low mark,my parents will scold me sharply.there's a generation gap among my parents and me,but it's always difficult to communicate.life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful,isn't it?gow should i devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university?i am very unhappy and lost.i need your help.
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I am a boy in the first grades (改为grade)of a senior high school.i feel uneasily(改为uneasy) recently.at home i feel like(加上a) prisoner.i am not allowed to watch tv or surf the internet.the only thing i have to do it(去掉it) is studying.every time i got(改为get) a low mark,my parents will scold me sharply.there's a generation gap among(改为between) my parents and me,but(改为and) it's always difficult to communicate.life are(改为is) supposed to be colorful and wonderful,isn't it?gow should i devote all my time and energy to the (去掉the)study so as to entering (改为enter)a good university?i am very unhappy and lost.i need your help.保证全部都对。
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I am a boy in the first grade of a senior high school.i feel uneasily recently.at home i feel like a prisoner.i am not allowed to watch tv or surf the internet.the only thing i have to do is studying.every time i got a low mark,my parents will scold me sharply.there's a generation gap between my parents and me,but it's always difficult to communicate.life is supposed to be colorful and wonderful,isn't it? should i devote all my time and energy to the study so as to enter a good university?i am very unhappy and lost.i need your help.
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I am a boy in the first grades《 in》 a senior high school.i feel 《upset》recently.at home i feel like prisoner.i am not allowed to watch tv or surf the internet.the only thing i have to do 《which》 is 《study》.every 《times》 i got a low mark,my parents 《would》 scold me sharply.there's a generation gap among my parents and me,but it's always difficult to communicate.life 《is》supposed to be colorful and wonderful,isn't it?《》 should i devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university?i am very unhappy and lost.i need your help.
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I am a boy in the first grade(1) of a senior high school.I feel uneasy(2) recently. At home I feel like a(3) prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the internet. The only thing I have to do (4) is studying. Every time I get(5) a low mark,my parents will scold me sharply. There's a generation gap between(6) my parents and me. But it's always difficult to communicate. Life is(7) supposed to be colorful and wonderful,isn't it? Why(8) should I devote all my time and energy to (9) study so as to enter(10) a good university? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help.
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