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1-1请帮我把以下我写的英文句子 修正语法 帮我改通顺一点的 拜托><!!! 紧急需要修正

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今天我一到幼儿园,我的老师告诉我说有几个孩子开始在训练上厕所了toilet training了
其实我们班上大部分的孩子已经都可以自己上厕所.而不用包尿布了
只有少部分的孩子还在包尿布,为了让他们长大更学习
我们老师们决定他们必须开始练习自己去上厕所了
也因为这样,所以要特别注意他们上厕所的时候,有没有确实的大便和小便了
所以现在的我 都会特别帮忙注意他们上厕所 大小便的时候
我认为这样的训练是必须的 并且是非常重要的
因为他们必须长大 必须知道什麼时候该上厕所
而不是仰赖著尿布

Today I got to kindergarten, my teacher told me that a few children started on a training toilet toilet training
In fact, most of the kids in our class could have on their own toilets. And do not pack diapers
Children are still only a small part of the diaper bag, in order to allow them to grow more study
Our teachers have decided that they must begin to practice their toilet up
Because of this, so pay special attention to their time on the toilet, there is indeed a stool and urine
So now I will be special attention to help them to the toilet when the toilet
I believe that such training is necessary and it is very important
Because they have to grow up to know when the toilet
Rather than rely on diapers

早上我们带著孩子出去散步到公园,原本要带孩子们去公园玩的
却发现公园里的门是被锁住的 也因为这样没办法
只好改变方向 带孩子们走别条路去散步

In the morning we take the kids out for a walk to the park, we had to take the children to the park to play
But he found that the park gate is locked because this is no way
Had to change the direction of the kids do not go way to go for a walk

虽然没办法去公园玩 但其实带孩子们在街道上散布我觉得是一件很棒的事情
孩子们可以从看到的事物中学习到很多不同的东西
例如 当我们看到有货车经过时 我们都会告诉他们说 那裏有一辆好大的货车喔 有人可以告诉我什麼颜色吗,孩子们都会抢先回答
给其他的例子 例如有经过超市时经过水果蔬菜广告看板时,我们都会让孩子们说出看到的蔬菜水果名字,孩子们也都会很兴奋的回答
我觉得在街道上散步真是个非常好的教学活动方式 因为可以依据看到的东西而延伸不同的主题去教导孩子

Although no way to play in the park, but in fact I took the children scattered on the streets think it is a great thing
Children can learn to see things from a lot of different things
For example, when we see a truck passes we will tell them that there's a big truck Oh, can someone tell me what color do, children will be the first to answer
Other examples given when fruits and vegetables through billboards, we will let the kids say when seen through the supermarket fruits and vegetables such as name, kids will be very excited to answer
I think a walk on the street is a very nice way of teaching activity because you can see things according to a different theme extends to teach children
下午我在班上做了一个我的活动
我用了我自己设计的拼图.去让孩子们挑战我做的四块拼图
虽然看似简单,但对这个年龄层的孩子来说.其实还是很困难的
算是一个满挑战性的活动吧
大部分的孩子都满兴奋的,但只有少部分的孩子成功的拼好四块我做的拼图
我觉得我设计的这个活动 还不错
因为可以训练孩子们的思维和逻辑能力等等的
In the afternoon I did a class my activities
I used my own design Puzzle challenge me to get the kids to do four puzzles
Although seemingly simple, but children of this age group is in fact still very difficult

今天也度过了很充实的一天
我认为每一周三天待在幼儿园的日子
我都会学习到很多不同各样的事情
真的对我的帮助很大

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今天我一到幼儿园,我的老师告诉我说有几个孩子开始在训练上厕所了toilet training了
其实我们班上大部分的孩子已经都可以自己上厕所.而不用包尿布了
只有少部分的孩子还在包尿布,为了让他们长大更学习
我们老师们决定他们必须开始练习自己去上厕所了
也因为这样,所以要特别注意他们上厕所的时候,有没有确实的大便和小便了
所以现在的我 都会特别帮忙注意他们上厕所 大小便的时候
我认为这样的训练是必须的 并且是非常重要的
因为他们必须长大 必须知道什麼时候该上厕所
而不是仰赖著尿布

Today I got to kindergarten, my teacher told me that a few children started on a training toilet toilet training
In fact, most of the kids in our class could have on their own toilets. And do not pack diapers
Children are still only a small part of the diaper bag, in order to allow them to grow more study
Our teachers have decided that they must begin to practice their toilet up
Because of this, so pay special attention to their time on the toilet, there is indeed a stool and urine
So now I will be special attention to help them to the toilet when the toilet
I believe that such training is necessary and it is very important
Because they have to grow up to know when the toilet
Rather than rely on diapers

早上我们带著孩子出去散步到公园,原本要带孩子们去公园玩的
却发现公园里的门是被锁住的 也因为这样没办法
只好改变方向 带孩子们走别条路去散步

In the morning we take the kids out for a walk to the park, we had to take the children to the park to play
But he found that the park gate is locked because this is no way
Had to change the direction of the kids do not go way to go for a walk

虽然没办法去公园玩 但其实带孩子们在街道上散布我觉得是一件很棒的事情
孩子们可以从看到的事物中学习到很多不同的东西
例如 当我们看到有货车经过时 我们都会告诉他们说 那裏有一辆好大的货车喔 有人可以告诉我什麼颜色吗,孩子们都会抢先回答
给其他的例子 例如有经过超市时经过水果蔬菜广告看板时,我们都会让孩子们说出看到的蔬菜水果名字,孩子们也都会很兴奋的回答
我觉得在街道上散步真是个非常好的教学活动方式 因为可以依据看到的东西而延伸不同的主题去教导孩子

Although no way to play in the park, but in fact I took the children scattered on the streets think it is a great thing
Children can learn to see things from a lot of different things
For example, when we see a truck passes we will tell them that there's a big truck Oh, can someone tell me what color do, children will be the first to answer
Other examples given when fruits and vegetables through billboards, we will let the kids say when seen through the supermarket fruits and vegetables such as name, kids will be very excited to answer
I think a walk on the street is a very nice way of teaching activity because you can see things according to a different theme extends to teach children下午我在班上做了一个我的活动
我用了我自己设计的拼图.去让孩子们挑战我做的四块拼图
虽然看似简单,但对这个年龄层的孩子来说.其实还是很困难的
算是一个满挑战性的活动吧
大部分的孩子都满兴奋的,但只有少部分的孩子成功的拼好四块我做的拼图
我觉得我设计的这个活动 还不错
因为可以训练孩子们的思维和逻辑能力等等的
In the afternoon I did a class my activities
I used my own design Puzzle challenge me to get the kids to do four puzzles
Although seemingly simple, but children of this age group is in fact still very difficult

今天也度过了很充实的一天
我认为每一周三天待在幼儿园的日子
我都会学习到很多不同各样的事情
真的对我的帮助很大