找个英语好的人帮我看一篇作文,时态帮忙修改下,还有指点下哪里写的不好,谢谢!
就是因为英语不好所以才开始写英语日记的(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)词汇其实都是百度翻译的,主要是想积累
谢谢你
It's still a cold day today. (既然说了是今天,就用一般现在时)Everything went badly. I don't think I belong to No. 8 High School. (I don't think No. 8 Hight School suits me.) Every time (when) a nervous breakdown pushed me into the abyss, it took me a long time to climb up. (Every time when 引导时间状语从句,when省略) Inspite of all the pains I have been through, I still fight against my will and force myself to face those challenges. I treat my study with a responsible attitude, but it seems unrequited. I believe I can do well on other aspects, so I will keep fighting.
谢谢你!
谢谢!