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急！烦请高手翻译一下汉语部分的句子，用于研究生复试，另外帮我看一下有无语法错误、用词不当，不胜感激

1、自我介绍
Good morning, my dear professors and teachers. I ’m glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is lzy,26. I come from chifeng, a city of inter Mongolia. I graduated from dalian nationality university.major in financial management. I worked in students’ union in my school time,做了一年学生会主席，期间，我努力地为大家服务，搭建起学校和学生的桥梁。
2009,after graduation, I back to my hometown and worked in State Taxation Bureau in chifeng，虽然工作很忙，但我认为我的工作很有价值，让我理解了税收是取之于民用之于民的。我工作了两年，感受到自己的理论知识不足，所以想到大学中深造一下。
So I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I have been working.虽然准备的过程很辛苦，但庆幸的是，I can stand here today and have chance to be a member of Xiamen university which is 我梦想的大学。
And then, talk to my characters and hobby. I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of 摄影。In my spare time，我喜欢到大自然中，记录下大自然中美丽的景色,the sky, the sea,the mountan(山),the bird, the animals and the people, whatever 我认为美丽的东西 。如果你也喜欢摄影，我们可以结伴同行。
At last，I wanna say 我很希望到厦门大学读书，if I am given a chance to study here, I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.3q!
2、研究生期间你的计划。
Firstly，深入研究税收学课程
Secondly，将税收理论知识应用于具体的税收工作中
Thirdly，通过两年的学习，能够有能力写出一篇对税收体系有实践意义的学术论文

Answer 1

做了一年学生会主席，期间，我努力地为大家服务，搭建起学校和学生的桥梁。
For a year student association President, period, I tried to serve for you and set up schools and students of the bridge.

虽然工作很忙，但我认为我的工作很有价值，让我理解了税收是取之于民用之于民的。我工作了两年，感受到自己的理论知识不足，所以想到大学中深造一下。
Although the work is very busy, but I think my job is very valuable, let me understand the tax is the people, by the. I work for two years, feel the theory of knowledge is insufficient, so think of university study in it.
虽然准备的过程很辛苦，但庆幸的是
Although the process of preparation is hard, but the good news is
我喜欢到大自然中，记录下大自然中美丽的景色
I like to nature, record the nature in the beauty of the scene
我认为美丽的东西 。如果你也喜欢摄影，我们可以结伴同行。
we canI think of the beautiful things. If you also like photography, We can guys.
我很希望到厦门大学读书
I very want to xiamen university
研究生期间你的计划
During the graduate student of your plan
深入研究税收学课程
Further research tax courses
将税收理论知识应用于具体的税收工作中
I will tax theory knowledge used in the practical work of taxation
通过两年的学习，能够有能力写出一篇对税收体系有实践意义的学术论文
Through two years of study, to be able to write a tax system has practical significance for the scientific papers

Answer 2

做了一年学生会主席，期间，我努力地为大家服务，搭建起学校和学生的桥梁
i have done student body president for one year, during this period, I try to serve everyone, build schools and students a s a bridge

虽然工作很忙，但我认为我的工作很有价值，让我理解了税收是取之于民用之于民的。我工作了两年，感受到自己的理论知识不足，所以想到大学中深造一下
Although the work is busy, but I think my work is valuable, so I understand the tax is taken from the people giving back to people. I worked for two years and feel that their own lack of theoretical knowledge, so expect further studies about the university

虽然准备的过程很辛苦，但庆幸的是Although the process of preparing is very hard, but fortunately. 我梦想的大学my dream college

我喜欢到大自然中，记录下大自然中美丽的景色I like nature, beautiful natural scenery in the record我认为美丽的东西 。如果你也喜欢摄影，我们可以结伴同行。
I think that beautiful things. If you like photography, we traveled with.
研究生期间你的计划Graduate students during your plan.
In-depth Tax Course tax apply theoretical knowledge in the specific tax
将税收理论知识应用于具体的税收工作中
通过两年的学习，能够有能力写出一篇对税收体系有实践意义的学术论文Through two years of study, the ability to write one pair of the tax system, the practical significance of the papers
你的句子都很简单清晰 很好 不过你是研究生 这水平有点低了 祝你好运

Answer 3

I had been the chairman of Students' Union for one year. During that period, I worked hard to serve people, and built the bridge between studens and university.
Though the work was busy, I found it rather worthy for it made me understand that the revenue is from people and for people. After working for 2years, I felt a lack of theoretical knowledge, therefore I would like to have a further study in university.
Though the process was arduous, fortunately,
my ideal university
taking photos
I love to be in the open air and record the beautiful scenery of the nature.
I consider to be beautiful
If you like taking photos too, we could go in company.
I look forward to studying in Xiamen University.
your plan during the post-graduate study
deepen my research of taxation
apply the theoretical knowledge of taxation to the practical work
be able to write a practical research paper on taxation system after 2years' study

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