Question

大家帮忙看看这么翻译（汉译英）对不对，谢谢了

汉语：以便公司能够在竞争激烈的长途货运市场获得更多业务份额。
我的翻译：In order that the company at the competitive long-distance freight market to gain more business share
大家看看哪里有错误，帮我改改，谢谢了

Answer 1

明显是错的，这个应该是用翻译软件翻译的吧，完全没有语法。

追问

我英文很烂，是自己翻译的，我知道有错误，所以来提问，让大家帮忙改改，谢谢

Answer 2

百分之一百对的 So that companies can in the fierce competition in the long distance freight market share to get more business

Answer 3

改一下吧
in order that the company gain more business share in the competitive long-distance freight market.