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考研英语复试，自我介绍 ，求热心高手翻译，急！！！！

各位老师下午好，很高兴参加这个面试。我叫韩帅，英文名字AndyHan 今年23岁，来自江苏徐州，一个既美丽又古老的城市。就读于淮阴师范学院,学的是环境科学专业。我家有4口人，爸爸妈妈哥哥还有我，哥哥大我两岁，已经工作，爸爸妈妈都是勤劳的农民。我的爱好是晨跑，因为我喜欢早晨清新的空气，而且跑步可以使我健康。我的座右铭是“自信可以改变未来”。一旦你拥有自信，你就会获得强大的能量来面对一切。
没有人是完美的，所以我也有缺点，我的缺点是对社会了解很少，自己的知识量有限，所以我很想通过读研来开阔自己的眼界，更好的认识世界。谢谢。

Answer 1

Good afternoon teachers. I'm glad to attend this interview. My name is Han Shuai, and English name AndyHan .I am 23 now. Iam　from xuzhou，jiangsu　province,　 a shiny and beautiful ancient city. Studying in huaiyin normal university, I am major in environmental science . There are four people in my family, father\mother\brother and I. My brother is two years older, he has a job already. Mom and dad are industrious farmers. My hobby is running in the morning, for I like the fresh morning air, and running can make me healthy. My motto is "confidence can change the future". Once you have confidence, you will get the strong energy to face with everything.
No one is perfect, I also have shortcomings, my weakness is know very few about society , and my knowledge is at limited, so I really want to go to graduate school to widen my horizon, and know the world better. Thank you.
建议你修改一下语句的顺序。比如先写爸爸妈妈是农民，再写哥哥已工作。另外你的缺点很泛，建议换一个或者不写。希望对你有所帮助！预祝复试顺利通过哦~~

Answer 2

good afternoon ,professors,it"s my great hornor to be here for your interview,my name is ~~,my english name is ~~,i"am 23years old ,i come from xuzhou,jiangsu provinece,where is a beautiful and old city.