Question

帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误

I might not be the best applicant among all the international applicants, but I am and will always be the most diligent and the most special one. I plan to double or even triple major in the college and I want to pursue further graduate degree. I am not the typical bookish student, I know how to make Chinese knot, I learn violin by myself and now I can play several songs, I love singing and once was the member in the school choir, I love doing volunteer work: I have tutored a lot of kids with autism. Compared with those who have high SAT scores but have spent a lot of money and almost all their time on preparing for the SATs. I think I am better than them even though I may not have that high scores.

Answer 1

基本没错，要说有错的话，可能这里有点问题： I learn violin by myself and now I can play several songs，
songs是歌曲，带歌词的歌曲，是人演唱的，而小提琴演奏的应该是音乐，用music可能更准确些

Answer 2

没有

Answer 3

learn the violin....once I was