Question

短文改错。急求答案

High school for me is a door to the wider world. I used to being a dumb English learner,Therefore,I became a brave English speakr after I attended a Christmas party,that wasorganized by my foreign teacher Edward.At the party，Edward encouraged me to talk Chinese traditions during the Spring Festital and he was shared with me the British custom about Christmas.It was the first time that I have ever talked with a foreigner for so long.The party was fun,filled with games and talks,but most significant,I realized that my oral English was not so bad.Recently,a victory in an English speaking competition even won him an opportunity of a trip abroad.

Answer 1

being -> be
Therefore -> However
that was -> which was
talk -> talk about
was shared -> shared
custom -> customs
I have ever -> I had ever
fun -> funny
English speaking -> spoken English
him -> me

Answer 2

这也太多了吧
wider-wide
(am) used to be
therefiore- however
speakr-speaker
talk about
i have ever-i had ever

Answer 3

1、being.used to do,指过去常常做某事。
2、Therefore改为However
3、that was organized 中that 改为which.非限制性定语词不能用that引导
4、talk后面加上about
5、was shared with中was去掉
6、the first time 前面加上 for
7、most significant前面加上the
8、him改为me
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