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this is a story tell by my father:when i was boy ,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the spring festival,my grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.one time i just couldntwait for the spring festival dinner,as i was about take a piece from a cooked duck,i saw grangma in the kitchen looking at me.shake her head,she said,"it isnt a good time to do that ,dear."at once i apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started,you know,that was a dinner we had waited for several month"
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Answer 1

this is a story【 [told ]】 by my father:when i was【 [a] 】boy ,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the spring festival,my grandma was the best cooker in the world【 [and ] 】could make the most delicious dishes.one time i just couldn't wait for the spring festival dinner,【[so] 】i was about to take a piece from a cooked duck,i saw grangma in the kitchen looking at me. 【[shaking]】 her head,she said,"it isnt a good time to do that ,dear."at once i 【[apologized] 】and controlled 【myself 】at my best till the dinner started,you know,that was a dinner we had 【been waiting】 for several 【[months]】

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Answer 2

this is a story told by my father:when i was a boy ,the most exciting thing was to celebrate the spring festival,my grandma was the best cook in the world and could make the most delicious dishes.one time i just couldn't wait for the spring festival dinner,as i was about to take a piece from a cooked duck,i saw grangma in the kitchen looking at me.shaking her head,she said,"it isnt a good time to do that ,dear."at once i apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started,you know,that was a dinner we had waited for several month"

Answer 3

这是一个故事告诉我的父亲：当我还是个孩子，最令人兴奋的事情什么时候庆祝是春节，我的奶奶是最好的厨师在世界上能做出最美味的dishes.one时间我只是couldntwait为春节晚宴，当我刚把一块煮熟的鸭子，我看到奶奶在厨房看me.shake她的头，她说，“这不是一个很好的时间来这样做，亲爱的。”我立刻道歉，控制我的最好的我直到晚餐开始，你知道，这是一个晚餐我们等了几个月”

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