Question

英语演讲稿帮忙润色一下，这真的对我很重要，紧急。感激不尽。

When I was a schoolchild, my dream is to be a engineer. Once I told parents my ambition. They thought it was ridiculous and said that engineer is not suitable for a girl, which make me very angry. I quarrel with them and said I will follow my heart to do what I really like and they don’t need to pay any attention to my future. A few days later, my teacher told me that there is going to be a math competition and I should prepare for it with my father’s guidance. I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time .Suddenly I realized I have told my parents that I don’t need any help from them. I have to make a hard choice. I would either break my promise and ask them for help, or prepare for the competition myself. I was in floods of tears. I don’t want to lose my face to ask for their help, too. I know that the competition is really important to me. Then I was confused. If I do so, it will not just lose my face and they would never take my opinions seriously. So I chose to prepare for the challenge myself. Every time I come across the difficult problems, I was helpless and don’t know who I can turn to. But I don’t want to give up. I devote all my time to do exercise and give up all the parties. Finally I came first in the contest. All my devotions were paid off.
题目是the pains of growing up,90秒演讲

Answer 1

When I was a schoolchild, my dream was to be a engineer. However , when I told parents my ambition, they thought it was ridiculous and said that engineer is not suitable for a girl, which made me very angry. I argued with them and said I would follow my dream to do what I really liked and they didn't need to worry about my future. A few days later, my teacher told me that there was going to be a math competition and I should prepare for it with my father’s guidance. I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time .Suddenly I realized I had told my parents that I din’t need any help from them. I had to make a hard choice that I would either break my promise and ask them for help, or prepare for the competition by myself. I burst into tears. I don’t want to lose my face to ask for their help, though I knew that the competition was really important to me. The reason why I didn't do so was that not only would it lose my face but also they would never take my opinions seriously. So I chose to meet the challenge by myself. Every time I came across the difficult problems, I was helpless and din’t know who I can turn to. But I made up my mind not to give up. I devoted all my time and energy to do exercises and give up all the parties. Finally I came first in the contest. All my devotions were paid off.

I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time不明白此句要表达什么意识not only

Answer 2

I dreamed to be an engineer when I was still a schoolchild. But my parents weren't supportive when I told them about it.
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