Question

大神帮忙短文改错

第一篇：
Last month, I went to the mountain village which my
grandparents live. It is five years until Ilast went there.Great
changes have been taken place in the past five years. Hardly had
I got off the bus than a high water tower came into my eyes. Now
villagers can drink fresh water. Villagers no long use firewood.
Marsh gas, a new type of cheap and clean energy, make it very
convenient to cook and light. As impressed me most was that the best
building in the village is the school. There all children can receive
good education. I was greatly shocking to see all the changes in the
countryside. I believe the villagers will have better life in the future.
第二篇:
Yesterday Mr.Smith, from Canada, gave us a lecture
about his country. As a second largest country in the world ,
it covers with about a quarter of the world's land area .
But it's population is very small, about 32 million.
People in Canada mainly say French and English. The
weather in Canada is quite differently from area to area.
There are many lakes in Canada , which supply them with
one three of the world's fresh water . Canada also has a lot
of forests which makes it the biggest producer of paper in
the world . Beside ,Canada also has much beautiful scenery.
第三篇：
There is a old couple living near our school.
They have lived a simple and peaceful life until
the husband was diagnosed with a rare illness.
A lot of attempt had been made to hide the
fact which the old man developed a serious illness .
Therefore , he finally learned the secret . Instead of
losing his heart , the old man hugged his wife tightly ,
convincing her that he wouldn't easy give up . Many
a person were moved to tears , including me . I always
believe God helps those whoever help themselves

Answer 1

第一篇
1：which 改成 where 这里是指地点，应该用where
2:is 改成was 因为说的是上个月发生的事，通篇都应该过去时态
3：in 改成for for+时间段 有持续的意思 句子时态用现在完成时
4：than 改成when 根据句子的意思，应该是“当我下车的时候一座很高的水他就映入了我的眼帘
5：long 改成longer 固定搭配，no longer,意思是“不再。。。”
6：正确的
7：as 改成 what 这题句子却成分，应该是“让我印象最深刻的东西是。。。。”，必须用what
8:is 改成 was 句子时态要保持一致
9：shocking 改成 shocked 这里是形容人，要用ed形式
10：better 前面加 a

第二篇
1：from前加who
2：正确的
3：covers改成 covered
4:it's 改成 its
5:say改成 speak
6:differently改成 different
7：with改成for
8：three改成third
9:which 改成that
10：Beside 改成Besides

第三篇
1：is 改成 was
2：lived后面加with
3：正确的
4：attempt 改成attempts
5:which 改成that
6:Therefore 改成 However
7:正确的
8:easy 改成easily
9:去掉a
10:those 后面加 people

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