Question

帮我改一篇短文改错，谢了！

After 5 years away in my hometown,I find that
The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed
a lot.The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop
across the street from our middle school were gone
There exsit now a park that has a small river running
through.The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and
Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city,and sports
center has been built in their place . the market at the corner of
Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to
a supermarket.Besides the bookstore next top our middle school

Answer 1

1.in 改为 from away from表示离开家乡
2.living 改为 live used to do 表示过去做某事
3.older 改为old 这里不需要用比较级，因为没有更年轻的店
4.from 改为next to 街道和学校之间不能用from
5.exist 改为exists 主语是park 第三人称单数
6.though 改为through though 表示尽管，through表穿过
7.去掉been 工厂不是被搬走，而是主动搬走的，如果要用被动的话应该是be moved to
8.their 改为its 第三人称单数
9.去掉been 主动让位，不是被动
10.正确

Answer 2

living___live
older----old
exsit-----exsits
has----have
way----away