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短文改错itisnodoubtthateveryonemakespromisesallhislife。therefore,justastheproverbgoes,“pr...
短文改错it is no doubt that everyone makespromises allhislife。therefore,just as the proverb goes,“promise is debt。”that is,once you made a promise,youjust keep it if you break your words,you won‘t be a preson worth of good faith。stillmoreworse,you‘ll lose your friendsandeven fame。so i think it necessaryandimportant to think it twice after making apromiseandkeeping it once you‘ve made it whatever happens。only by this way can you make a true man which deserves people‘s respect。
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(It改睁尺成There) is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life. Therefore, just as the proverb goes, “promise is debt.” That is, once you (made改成make 或 在made前握扒面加上have) a promise, you just keep it. If you break your (words改为word), you won‘t be a preson (worth改为worthy) of good faith. Still (去掉段早昌more) worse, you‘ll lose your friends and even fame. So I think it necessary and important to think it twice (after改为before) making a promise and (keeping改为keep) it once you‘ve made it whatever happens. Only (by改为in) this way can you make a true man (which改为who) deserves people‘s respect.
(It改睁尺成There) is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life. Therefore, just as the proverb goes, “promise is debt.” That is, once you (made改成make 或 在made前握扒面加上have) a promise, you just keep it. If you break your (words改为word), you won‘t be a preson (worth改为worthy) of good faith. Still (去掉段早昌more) worse, you‘ll lose your friends and even fame. So I think it necessary and important to think it twice (after改为before) making a promise and (keeping改为keep) it once you‘ve made it whatever happens. Only (by改为in) this way can you make a true man (which改为who) deserves people‘s respect.
参考资料: 英语牛人团
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第一行his改为their
第二行made改租磨为make,more去掉
第三行it后面加is
第四行it去掉
第五局which改伍型团腔橘成who
第二行made改租磨为make,more去掉
第三行it后面加is
第四行it去掉
第五局which改伍型团腔橘成who
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短文改错 It is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life。Therefore,差姿亩just as the proverb goes,“promise is debt。”虚森that is,once you have made a promise,you just have to keep it. If you break your words,you won‘t be a preson worth of good faith。Still worse,you‘ll lose your friends and even (credibility)fame。So I think it necessary and important to think it twice after making a promise and keeping it once you‘册闭ve made it whatever happens。Only by this way can you make a true man which(who) deserves people‘s respect。
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