Question

求英语高手帮忙修改一下英文简历，看看有没有基本的语法错误什么的，非常感谢

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M/F: Male · Date of Birth: 04/25/1984
Mobile phone: +86*********· Email:********@163.com
Address: ***
2010-Present: **University – **, China
Education
 Masters Student: Department of Physics, School of Science
 Expected Graduation: Autumn 2013
 Main Courses of Study: Experiment of Modern Physics, Condensed Matter Physics, High Temperature Superconducting Coated Conductor, Fundamentals of Optoelectronic Technology
 GPA: 3.36

2004-2008: ** University – Xi’an, China
 Bachelor of Science: Optical Information Sciences and Technology, School of Technical Physics
 Main Courses of Study: College Physics, Advanced Mathematics, Physics Experiments, Semiconductor Physics, Solid-state Physics, Modern Optics Introduction , Physical and Applied Optics
 Final Year Project: Produce the computer-generated-hologram using computer and optics theory

Professional Experiences

2008-2010: *******Co. , Ltd. – ****, China
 Position: Automotive Electronics Engineer at Product Department
 Main Job Description：Pre-design and engineering cost estimate for car audio system. Update and revise designs according to customer request

2011-Present: **************- Shanghai
 Main Job Description：Deposition of various buffer layers for coated conductors on textured Ni-5%W tapes using reel-to-reel DC reactive sputtering
 Experimental Methods: Experience in DC reactive sputtering and Pulsed laser deposition (PLD)- Deposited high quality films; X-ray diffraction scans and pole figures- Evaluate biaxial texture of the grown films; Atomic force microscopy (AFM) and SEM- Observe the microstructure of the grown films; PPMS- Measure superconductive transition temperature and critical current density
 Main Participating Projects: Science and Technology Commission and Ministry of Science and Technology of China . Meeting Participation- The 11th national superconducting seminar

Publications

 Deposition buffer layers for coated conductors on textured NiW tapes using reel-to-reel DC reactive sputtering (in prepared)
 Epitaxial growth of buffer layers for coated conductors

Answer 1

首先每一项分的清晰点比较好哦~是要求职吗？
如：
一. Personality Information: 不用写M/F，写Gender 就可以了，你应该再加一些，Nationality, Political Status,and so on.
二. Education Background 一般是从大学写到高中，你教育这里最好画个表，一一对应，时间，毕业学校，学历，专业，备注，描述你学习方向
三. 工作经验这个，时间也是要从离你最近的开始写，即先写2011-present
最后最好再加个自我评价Self-assessment 哦~

希望对你有帮助哦~