英语短文改错、共有10处错误 My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy……

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My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.

  He did not want share things with other people. For 1._______

  example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._______

  in a secret place where I couldn’ t find it. Then he 3. _______

  ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 4. _______

  He said he is busy. That is, a game of 5. _______

  tennis making him very busy. He did not care 6. _______

  if something he did made people angry. For 7. _______

  instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _______

  loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 9. _______

  he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10.______

  with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his

  classmates with their lessons.

  答案及解析

  1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。

  2. them 改为 it。依据上下文, 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数, 后边的代词显然用 it, 而不是 them。

  3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句, 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语, 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。

  4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个, 而 others 指另一些。

  5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。

  6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语, 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。

  7. 此行无错。

  8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。

  9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词, 此处修饰名词 music, 应用形容词。

  10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。
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