Question

书面表达根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。(10分)

书面表达根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。(10分)

Answer 1

One day, Li Ming met two old friends of his on the street. So they went to a restaurant to have dinner. They were so happy that they drank a lot of wine. After the dinner, Li Ming said goodbye to his friends and drove his car away. He was so drunk that he can’t see things clearly. Besides, he can’t drive the car well. Suddenly, he drove the car and hit a tree. He was badly hurt and was sent to the hospital. In hospital, a policeman told him that he shouldn’t drive a car after drinking wine. It was very dangerous. He would be punished. Li Ming realized his mistake and promised not to do that again.

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，有四副图画，这篇短文写作的关键是看清图片里的内容，在理解上不能有偏差。所以我们首先要弄清楚图片里的内容，它主要讲了一个什么故事，然后才能开始写作。通过仔细观察图片我们可以知道，这几张图片反映的是一个人酒后开车，最后出了事故这样一件事。接下来我们需要用正确的英语把整个事情的过程叙述清楚、完整。通过分析可知，这篇短文应该主要使用一般过去时态，所以要注意每句话中的谓语动词的形式。在发挥想象力的同时，还要注意忠于原文的意思。 【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，这篇短文将图片中所描述的事情完整、准确的叙述了下来。短文中没有遗漏一些细节，如图片中的人物和朋友们喝酒后开车离开，后来撞到了一棵树上，被送到了医院，同时受到了警察的训斥，知道这样做是不对的。这个过程描写得很清楚，准确。在这篇短文中使用了一些较好的句型，如They were so happy that they drank a lot of wine、He was so drunk that he can’t see things clearly、He was badly hurt and was sent to the hospital、Li Ming realized his mistake and promised not to do that again.等。文中时态、人称都符合要求，表达也比较流畅，是一篇不错的短文。