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有这么几个问题：
1. 不太地道，比较中式。
2. 个别语法错误。
3. 句与句之间逻辑关系不密切，主要是主语选择不迅神理想。
4. 信息主次不分明。
因此，高分的可模昌塌能旦圆性不大。
示范如下：Lotus flowers, one of the famous flowers in China, are beloved by people. There are many lakes and ponds where Lotus flowers are good for planting. Lotus flowers have gorgeous colours. They will blossom in the morning in summer and close at night with a season of about two to three months when many tourists are attracted to enjoy. They have varied functions, including refining the water face, beautifying the courtyards, purifying water, decreasing pollution and improving environments. Lotus flowers symbolize purity and elegance of a person as noble moral character for their quality of greeting the sunshine without fear and getting out of the mud without dirt, which are also the important materials for poets and painters to create . The place where there are many lotus is usually a visiting place of the photographers.
1. 不太地道，比较中式。
2. 个别语法错误。
3. 句与句之间逻辑关系不密切，主要是主语选择不迅神理想。
4. 信息主次不分明。
因此，高分的可模昌塌能旦圆性不大。
示范如下：Lotus flowers, one of the famous flowers in China, are beloved by people. There are many lakes and ponds where Lotus flowers are good for planting. Lotus flowers have gorgeous colours. They will blossom in the morning in summer and close at night with a season of about two to three months when many tourists are attracted to enjoy. They have varied functions, including refining the water face, beautifying the courtyards, purifying water, decreasing pollution and improving environments. Lotus flowers symbolize purity and elegance of a person as noble moral character for their quality of greeting the sunshine without fear and getting out of the mud without dirt, which are also the important materials for poets and painters to create . The place where there are many lotus is usually a visiting place of the photographers.
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