Question

请英文高手帮我纠正一下英文翻译处的错误

中文部分
一走进办公室就闻到一股咖啡香，原来外籍老板贡献了自家的咖啡豆和咖啡机。
咖啡对于我来说已经不是好喝不好喝的问题，只是每当我碰到的伤脑筋的事，或累的的时候，都喜欢倒上一杯咖啡捧在手上。所以我非常喜欢房间充满咖啡香的感觉。

英文部分
The odour
of coffee pervades the air when I get into the office.
One of our
foreign bosses bring his own coffee machine and coffee bean to our office.
For me,
the taste is not the most important thing. I have used to hold a cup full in
hot coffee when I met some complicated things or when I was tired but still
need work. So I like the feeling when a room full in coffee odour.

Answer 1

1. 时态错了，叙述过去的事情应该用过去时：pervaded; got into; brought
2. odour 不好的气味更常用；sweet odour 或fragrance香气
3. I have used to hold 改成 I have got used to holding
4. a cup full in 改成a cup full of 或a cup filled with
5. 一般情况用一般现在时：meet; am
6. when a room...改成 when a room is full of/filled with the sweet smell of coffee.

Answer 2

中文部分
一走进办公室就闻到一股咖啡香，原来外籍老板贡献了自家的咖啡豆和咖啡机。
咖啡对于我来说已经不是好喝不好喝的问题，只是每当我碰到的伤脑筋的事，或累的的时候，都喜欢倒上一杯咖啡捧在手上。所以我非常喜欢房间充满咖啡香的感觉。

英文部分
The odour
of coffee pervades the air when I get into the office.
One of our
foreign bosses has brought his own coffee machine and coffee bean to our office.
To me,whether the coffee tastes good or not doesn't mean much, for
I have got used to holding a cup filled with
hot coffee when I meet with some complicated things or when I am tired during work hours. So I like the atmosphere when the room has a coffee smell.