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InthemoringofApril29,2008,hundredsofmillionsofmiddleschoolsanduniversitiesalloverChin... In the moring of April29,2008,hundreds of millions of middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports progarm.Eleven thousands students and I in our city took a active part of this porgram .The porgram was holding to call on students to have daily exercise in the hope we will have good health to study and enjoy ourselves.I think that it is a good idea for us students to have daily exercise. Although we were spend an hour a day on exercise,it is very worth it . Taking exercise every day help us build our bodies and keep a clear mind.In this way we can feel energetic and study more efficient.
因为我在考虑hope后是否加that 和and I 怎么改的问题,但我觉得还是在students 前加other这个该法更不错,
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In the moring of---On the morning of(具体某一天用on)
thousands---thousand(前面有具体的数字时,thousand不加s)
and I--including me(我包括在这一万一千个学生当中。用了and就不包括在其中了。)
a active part--an active part(active是元音开头)
holding---held(被动)
hope---hope that (we will have good health to study and enjoy ourselves是hope的同位主从句,that不可省)
have good health--be healthy
were spend--spent (主动)
help---helps(非谓语动词作主语,谓语要用第三人称单数形式)
efficient--efficiently (这是副词,修饰动词study)

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29---29th(是不是没打完整)
joined in---去掉in
eleven thousands----thousands去掉s
active---actively
holding---held
hope后加that
that it is去掉it
were spend--去掉were
worth后加of
help改成helps
effient改成effiently
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更正在括号处注明,总共十处错误。这是2011年辽宁高考英语试题原题,保证准确。 In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports (were改成was)
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In the moring1.(morning) of April29,2008,hundreds2.(hundred) of millions of
middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national
student sports progarm.Eleven thousands 3.(thousand) students and I in our
city took a active part of4.(换成in) this porgram .The porgram was holding5.(hold) to
call on students to have daily exercise in the hope 6.(that)we will have good
health to study and enjoy ourselves.I think that it is a good idea for
us.7.(we) students to have daily exercise. Although we were spend8.(spending) an
hour a day on exercise,it is very worth it . Taking exercise every day
help9.(helps) us build our bodies and keep a clear mind.In this way we can feel
energetic and study more efficient10.(efficiently).

补充:就加that吧,否则不自然,特别扭的。and I 没有错误。例子:My brother and I. other students没有必要,因为说学生,不用太强调是别的学生。

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1.in-on
2.China-the China
3.Eleven thousands-Eleven thousand
4.a active-an active
5.part of-part in
6.holding-held
7.hope-hope that
8.was spend-spend
9.help us-helps us
10.we can-can we
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