Question

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1.Nowadays some secondary schools give children general education in a range of traditional disciplines, while others claim to be more specialized and pay attention to some particular classes, excluding some general ones. Which of two school types is better for children and why?
2.Often new commercial centers are planed with respect to green areas and sport facilities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Why?

Answer 1

1.
benefit of learning a range of traditional disciplines:
(1) expand their outlook, acquire diverse konwledge, improve their employability
(2)help students to discover which subject they like, so they can focus on this subject
disadvantage:
students do not have enough time and energy to learn so many courses ,which may lead to a failure to all the subjects

be more specialized and pay attention to some particular classes excluding general ones

advantages:
can specialize in one favorite skills ,devote all the time to study it, which can assist the student to a expert in this field.
disadvantages:
students do not learn general ones will have no chance to get a admission to university. if some student want to pusue their studies in the future

2
i agree with
two reasons
(1) they realise the importance of environmental protection, in the past peple focused on the exteiror appearance and practiality of buildings
(2) people have realised the importance of exercise society . therefore, it is understandable that new buildings were constructed without destructing sports courts and equipment.

Answer 2

第一个写五段式，开头写写背景，选出一个你认为好的type。二三四段想三个观点支持你的主旨，第五段总结一下
第二个写四段式，还是开头背景，写出agree还是disagree，二段写出理由，三段写个让步，说明下另一方面的考虑。第四段重申下主旨。

Answer 3

英文的呀

追问

你可以用中文写思路

追答

看不懂啊