Question

英语作文，请问各位同学老师我这篇英语作文有没有错，哪里错了，请以一一指点，谢谢大家，我会改进的

Do you know Laughing Cat Diary?
Laughing Cat Diary is very fun book.
If you not looks laughing cat diary？
You should looks laughing cat diary.
If you is children?
You should very like.
Laughing Cat Diary relly is young and old's like book.
Because i read laughing cat diary .
You come look?

Answer 1

Do you know Laughing Cat Diary?
Laughing Cat Diary is a very funny book.
If you haven't read laughing cat diary yet,
You should read it immediately.
If you are a child,
You may very like it after finish reading it
Laughing Cat Diary can really be the young and the old's favourite book.
Because (i read laughing cat diary 好牵强的理由）it is so interesting.
what do you reckon?

太太太太Chinglish了
fun是不可数名词
funny才是形容词
book是可数名词
前面要加a
看书要用的是动词read
you作主语be动词用arre
children是集合名词，本身是复数
单数是child
like是及物动词，后面必须有宾语it
the加形容词表示一类人
like作为喜欢之意是动词
想表达最喜欢的，得用形容词favourite
全文出现了六个 Laughing Cat Diary
你是在凑字数吗
学会用it 好不好
最后一句就更精辟了~~
我改后的句子是：你们怎么认为，意思是邀请大家都来看笑猫日记
ps: immediately意思是立刻、马上=at once
have done是现在完成时 read的过去分词还是read
if引导让步状语从句，它不是疑问词
may加动词原形表示判断推测

看在我任劳任怨给你改的份上，给个赞同，一定一定评个最佳答案啊

Answer 2

Laughing Cat Diary is very fun book is后面加 a
If you not looks laughing cat diary？ 改为If you don't watch laughing cat diary,
You should looks laughing cat diary 改为 should look
If you is children? 改为 If you are children
You should very like 改为 You should very like it
Laughing Cat Diary relly is young and old's like book.
改为 Laughing Cat Diary is relly young but old to like a book

Answer 3

第二句 laughing cat diary is a very fun book
第三局 if you havent read laughing cat diary,
第四句 you should read it
第五句 if you are a children
第六句 you will like it very much
第七句 it will be really liked by both youngman and oldman
第八句 because I have read it
第九句 come on to read the book and you will get fun

主要错误：
1.看书要用 read book 而不是look book
2.谓语，语态，句子构成都不通顺
楼主加油啊，建议从头学起

Answer 4

Do you know Laughing Cat Diary?
Laughing Cat Diary is a very fun book.
If you do not watch laughing cat diary？
You should watch laughing cat diary.
Are you a child?
You should very like it .
Laughing Cat Diary relly is young and old's like book.
Because i watch laughing cat diary .
You come watch?

Answer 5

Do you know the Laughing Cat Diary?
It is a very funny book.
If you haven't read the Laughing Cat Diary?
You'd better read it now.
If you are a child, you will definitely enjoy it.
Laughing Cat Diary is a book suits both the young and the old.
For I have been reading it.
So come and read it together.....

嘻嘻,这是一篇关于广告的作文么? 我改了一些语法和词汇,希望可以帮到你....

Answer 6

第二行，is a very funny book
三行，if you don't read
4，you should read
5,if you are a child or if you are children
6 ,really ,like book改成，favourite book
7,and i think you will like it