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Dear David
Howare you doing?I have had a good time in this summer.I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest mountain in Shandong Province.
Wearrived the bottom of the Taishan with told many jokes.The ways to go to themountain is diffculty. Although tired we were we didn't give up.We overcame manydiffcults with passersbys' help.
Finally,we arrived the top of Taishan,and many beautiful scenes in oureyes that wo felt very happy.
Now,I've told my experience of this summer.How about you?I'm lookingforward your reply!

Daer David
Howare you? I'm writing the emile fell you about my summer vacation travel.
Iwith my friend went to Taishan in the summer vacation. Taishan is the highestmountains in the ShandongProvince. It also famousall around the CHINA.We are delighted in travel.The mountain path is difficult for us walking. Althoughwe are very hauseted. We don't up the time. Eventually, we arrived the mountainpeak. The environment is well. We looked a lot of varity plants . Such as,flowers, green trees.Although we don't know it names.

Answer 1

I have had a good time in this summer，这里的第一个have去掉
I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest mountain in Shandong Province.
这里的第一个had去掉

We arrived the bottom这里 arrived后面加at
The ways to go to themountain is diffculty后面两个词改成was difficult
I'm lookingforward your reply!这里forward后面加to

回信中 I'm writing the emile fell you about my summer vacation travel.这里fell改成to tell
Iwith my friend went to Taishan in the summer vacation. 这里改成 I went to Taishan in the summer vacation with my friend.

这篇文章中你时态有问题，用了很多一般现在时，全部改成一般过去，比如is改成was don’t改成didn’t

Answer 2

Dear David
How are you doing? I had a good time this summer. I had visited the TaiShanMountainwith my classmates that is the highest mountain inShandongProvince.
We arrived at the bottom of the Tai Shan and during the journey we told many jokes. The way to the mountain is hard. Although tired, we didn't give up. We overcame many difficulties with the help of the passers-bys.
Finally, we arrived the top of Tai Shan, where we saw many beautiful scenes. We felt very happy.
Now, I've told my experience of this summer. How about you? I'm looking forward to your reply!

Daer David
How are you? I'm writing the email to you about my summer vacation.
I , with my friend, went to Taihan in the summer vacation. Taishan is the highest mountain inShandongProvince. It is also famous all around theChina. We are delighted to travel there for a tour. The mountain path is difficult for us to climb through. Although we are very exhausted, we didn't give up during the journey. Eventually, we arrived at the mountain peak. The environment is good. We saw a lot of variety of plants, such as flowers, green trees. Although we don't know there names, it’s fun to see them.

Answer 3

Dear David
How are you doing? I have had a goodtime in this summer. I had visited the Taishan，which is the highest mountain in Shandong Province ，with myclassmates.
We arrived in the bottom of the Taishan.The way to the mountain is diffcult. Although tired we were we didn't give up.We overcame many diffculties with passersbys' help.
Finally,we reached the top of Taishan,with many beautiful scenesin oureyes that we felt very happy.
Now,I've told my experience of thissummer.How about you?I'm lookingforward to your reply!

Daer David
Howare you? I'm writing the email to tell you about my summer vacation travel.
My friend and I went to Taishan during thesummer vacation. Taishan is the highest mountains in the ShandongProvince. It isalso famous all around the CHINA.We are delighted in travel.The mountain pathis difficult for our walking. Althoughwe are very exhausted. We don't up thetime. Eventually, we arrived in the mountainpeak. The scenary is wonderful. Welooked a lot of various plants . Such as,flowers, green trees.Although we don'tknow their names.

Answer 4

Dear David
How is it going? I had a good time in this summer when visitting the Taishan, the highest mountain in Shandong Province,with my classmates.
Happy and joy,we arrived at the foot of the Taishan.The walk path to the mountain was much more challenging than what we expected before. Tired as we were,we didn't give up. We overcame many diffculties with passersbys' selflessness help.
Finally,we reached the top of Taishan.the beautiful scenes in our eyes made us felt proud.
Now,this is my experience of this summer.How about you?I'm looking forward to your reply.
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Answer 5

1. doing→going 2.去掉have had a good time中的have 3.told→telling 4.difficulty→difficult5.arrived后面加at .6.look forward 加to 7.ways →way