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It'sknownthatthegrowthofeconomicshasbroughtplentyofproblems,includingtheincreaseofliv...
It's known that the growth of economics has brought plenty of problems, including the increase of living cost for many urban dwellers.
This article focus on finding the reasons for the degradation of qualities of urban dwellers, and making some suggestions.
Although people's living qualities has been reduced a little, there's no doubt that the economical development has brought citizens some significant benefits. For example, citizens have much more access to pubic services than rural people, including medical care, education system, pubic transport and so forth. Without tax income from big cities' people, infrastructure is not possible to be instructed with sponsorship of government. As a consequence, the high-incomes pay more tax, whose the buying power should be reduced.
In addition, the effect of personal preference of consumption factor should not be ignored. Some people hold some luxury buying habits. Because of vanity, they would like to pay for the labels rather than average goods. It's inevitable for them to suffer from the economical issues.
What should be concerned more about is the guiding function provided by the authorities. Macro-ecnomic management is vital to conduct the inflation of economics. For example, reasonable promotion of the luxurious tax and put down the price the daily necessity should be an effective approach.
It's also important to protect the environment surrounding megacities. Both security of the air we breath and the water we drink are making up the factors that affect the satisfaction degree for residents.
In conclusion, environment and inflation of economic are the main reason for the sense of living qualities decrease for dwellers of big cities. And government's guide role should be the vital factor for solving this problem. 展开
This article focus on finding the reasons for the degradation of qualities of urban dwellers, and making some suggestions.
Although people's living qualities has been reduced a little, there's no doubt that the economical development has brought citizens some significant benefits. For example, citizens have much more access to pubic services than rural people, including medical care, education system, pubic transport and so forth. Without tax income from big cities' people, infrastructure is not possible to be instructed with sponsorship of government. As a consequence, the high-incomes pay more tax, whose the buying power should be reduced.
In addition, the effect of personal preference of consumption factor should not be ignored. Some people hold some luxury buying habits. Because of vanity, they would like to pay for the labels rather than average goods. It's inevitable for them to suffer from the economical issues.
What should be concerned more about is the guiding function provided by the authorities. Macro-ecnomic management is vital to conduct the inflation of economics. For example, reasonable promotion of the luxurious tax and put down the price the daily necessity should be an effective approach.
It's also important to protect the environment surrounding megacities. Both security of the air we breath and the water we drink are making up the factors that affect the satisfaction degree for residents.
In conclusion, environment and inflation of economic are the main reason for the sense of living qualities decrease for dwellers of big cities. And government's guide role should be the vital factor for solving this problem. 展开
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南京新航道学校为您评分：6.分 一般可以在6——7之间
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请我我有哪些问题可以改进的呢，谢谢您。
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你要是在南京 可以来这边参加免费雅思模考 对作文这块收获很大
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