Question

请高手翻译一下英文部分的错误。

中文部分：
今天过得实在是太糟糕了，让我实在是很想喝一杯很冰的可乐。当我进入第一家便利店的时候，他们只有一个冰柜，里面只放着非常贵的所谓的
运动饮料。于是我走了一段路来到了第二个超市，结果里面只卖进口的可乐。这种可乐是普通可乐的3倍。于是我改变了注意，决定在肯德基一份带可乐的套餐。结
果在堂吃的时候，先后有两个乞丐走到我旁边乞讨。其中一个乞丐还来了两次，第二次不仅来讨钱，还先用手摸着我的食物问我讨食物。今天真的实在是太糟糕的一
天。
英文部分：
Today is such a trouble day that's why I'm so want to
drink a very cold coke. But when I was enter one mall. They were only
put a very expensive drink which was so-called "sport drink" in their
only firgue. Then I walked 10 minutes to another supermarket, but there
only import coke which is 3 times than normal one. Then I changed my
mind and went to KFC order a meal which was include cold coke. But there
were two bagger beg to me when I was eatting here. And one of them came
to me for begging twice. And in her second time after her begging for
money, she just touched my food first then ask me for food. What a
trouble day today was!

Answer 1

英文部分的错误：
1. Today is such a trouble day
该句中的trouble改为terrible/awful, 表示“糟糕的”应用terrible/awful, trouble一般不能直接加名词。
2. that's why I'm so want to drink a very cold coke.
I'm改为I 因为am不能与want连用。
3. But when I was enter one mall.
was enter改为entered enter的过去式是entered，不借助于was
4. They were only put a very expensive drink which was so-called "sport drink" in their
去掉were
5. only firgue. Then I walked 10 minutes to another supermarket, but there
firgue改为fridge (冰箱）
6. only import coke which is 3 times than normal one. Then I changed my
在only前加was import改为imported 表示“进口的”应用imported
7. mind and went to KFC order a meal which was include cold coke. But there
order改为 and ordered 与前面的went并列。 was include改为included
8. were two bagger beg to me when I was eatting here. And one of them came
baggar改为beggars 两个乞丐，应用复数。
9. to me for begging twice. And in her second time after her begging for
去掉for begging twice可直接作状语。in改为at
10. money, she just touched my food first then ask me for food. What a
ask改为asked
11. trouble day today was!
trouble改为terrible/awful

Answer 2

Today it is such a troublesome day,and that's why I want very much to
drink a very cold coke cola. But when I enter one a mall, I find there are only
very expensive drinks which are so-called "sport drinks" in their
only fridger. Then I go out without buying any. I walk 10 minutes to another supermarket, but there they only have an
imported coke which is 3 times the price of the cola in the mall. Then I change my
mind and go to KFC to order a meal which includes a cold coke. But there
are two baggers while I am eating here. One of them HAS COME TO ME TWICE
begging. And the second time she comes she touches my food and asks me for it. What an
unlucky day it is taday!

Answer 3

今天过得实在是太糟糕了，让我实在是很想喝一杯很冰的可乐。当我进入第一家便利店的时候，他们只有一个冰柜，里面只放着非常贵的所谓的
运动饮料。于是我走了一段路来到了第二个超市，结果里面只卖进口的可乐。这种可乐是普通可乐的3倍。于是我改变了注意，决定在肯德基一份带可乐的套餐。结
果在堂吃的时候，先后有两个乞丐走到我旁边乞讨。其中一个乞丐还来了两次，第二次不仅来讨钱，还先用手摸着我的食物问我讨食物。今天真的实在是太糟糕的一天。

英文部分：
今天是这样一个麻烦的一天,为什么我这么想喝一个寒冷的可乐。但是当我进入一个购物中心。他们只把一个非常昂贵的饮料是所谓的“运动饮料”只有firgue。然后我走10分钟到另一个超市,但那里只有进口可乐3倍比正常的人。后来我改变心灵和去肯德基订餐,是包括冷可口可乐。但是
我是两个bagger求食时我在这里。其中的一个来向我发出召唤

Answer 4

Today was so trouble that i wanted to drink a cup of cold coke very much.But when I entered the first mall. There wre some expensive which so-called "sport drink" in their
only firgue.
. Then I walked 10 minutes to another supermarket, but there were only imported coke which were third than thenormal one.Then I changed my mind and went to KFC to order a meal which was including cold coke.
But there were two bagger begging to me when I was eatting. And one of them came
to me for begging twice. And at her second begging,she just touched my food before ask me for food. What a terribble day was.

Answer 5

trouble改为terrible更好 so不能用来修饰动词 再把前面的am去掉 coke不可数 去掉a 把was去掉 were去掉
Then I changed my mind中的 then改为so order前加to include前的was去掉 begger加s beg改为begging
ask改为asked today最好改为it

Answer 6

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