Question

高一英语短文改错 在线等@@! 急!

I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water．

Look back at my childhood experience,I think 1. ____．

that three reason might explain the fear．The first reason 2．——

is that 1 was not allowed to go near the water 3_____

when 1 was a child．for my mother had unreasonable 4．——

fear of it．So,even as a child I was taught see the 5______

water as something danger．Second,my eyes became 6．——

bad ones when I was five．If I took off my glasses in the 7．——

water,I couldn't see anything。but this increased my 8______

fear．The worst part of your experience is that as a 9_____．

child of ten I see a neighbor drown．Since then I 10_____．

have been more frightened．

Answer 1

1. Look→Looking。此处应该用现在分词作状语。
2. reason→reasons
3. 对
4. 在unreasonable 前加an。
5. 在see前加to。
6. danger→dangerous。形容词修饰复合不定代词。
7. 去掉ones。
8. but→so。此处表达因果关系。
9. your→my。
10. see→saw。

有空做一下这一篇：

I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________

my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might 2. ________

explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3. ________

near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a 4. ________

unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to 5. ________

see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes 6. ________

became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the 7. ________

water, I couldn't see anything, or this increased my fear. 8. ________

The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9. ________

a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened. 10. ________

1. Look→Looking。此处应该用现在分词作状语。
2. my前面加on / upon。look back on / upon是固定短语,意为回顾。
3. allow→allowed。此处应该用被动语态。
4. 第二个a→an。unreasonable fear是以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词an。
5. 去掉that。此句是简单句,that是多余用词。
6. danger→dangerous。形容词修饰复合不定代词。
7. glass→glasses。复数名词glasses意为眼镜。
8. or→so。此处表达因果关系。
9. 本行无错。
10. After→Since。介词短语since then常与现在完成时态连用。

Answer 2

学英语最好的办法是买一台有助于学英语的学习机.帮助自已掌握学习英语,我可以给你推荐一款.外语通IBOOX9688,这是步步高的,我现在用的就是我款机子.还有就是同步学,九门课程同步学的.