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Myself
Nowadays, “myself” this word is coming up in conversation. Because of “myself”, we can make progress also we can improve in our life quality. Actually, our life has a lifelong enemy that it’s “myself”. Everyday, Everytime, Everywhere we usually wrestle with temptation. It can say that we fight with “myself”. Of course, it gives ourself undergo trials but if you can bear hardships,after that, Not only you can have a feeling of satisfiction also you can success your life. At this moment some people think that how can we win ourself? , it has no method. You have to find yourself. I like myself for the simple reason that it help me get strong spirit and smart spirit.

Answer 1

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Myself
Nowadays, 【the word “myself”】 is coming up in conversation. Because of “myself”, we can make progress 【also improve】 our life quality. Actually, our life【 faces】 a lifelong enemy 【called】 “myself”. 【Whenever, wherever】 we usually wrestle with temptation. It can say that we fight with “myself”. Of course, it gives ourself undergo trials but if you can bear hardships,after that, Not only 【can you】 have a feeling of satisfiction 【but】 also you can success your life. At this moment 【do 】some people 【argue】 that how 【we can】 win ourself? it has no method. You have to find yourself. I like myself for the simple reason that it help me get strong spirit and smart spirit.

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Answer 2

1. myself this word --- the word myself
2. also --- and also
3. improve in --- improve
4. enemy that it's myself --- enemy. That is myself
5. usually --- often
6. It can say --- we can say
7. ourself --- ourselves
8. Not only you can --- Not only can you
9. also --- and also
10. success your life --- succeed in your life
11. ourself --- ourselves
12. it has no --- there is no
13. find yourself --- find it yourself
14. it help --- it helps

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Answer 3

No bad try. The following revision is just for your reference. It may have errors and welcome your correction. Good luck!

Nowadays, the word “myself” is coming up in our conversation again and again. Due to the fact that “myself” exists all the time in our life, we can make progress in our work and study and improve the quality of our life.
Actually, we all have lifelong enemies that are nobodies but ourselves.
(or, you can say: Actually, it is very clear to me that I have a lifelong enemy that is myself.

It doesn't matter when and where, we are always involved in a battle with the temptation of ourselves, which means we have to timelessly fight with ourselves.

It is hard to overcome ourselves and we have to bear the pain and hardship to be successful. However the joy will be great after we beat ourselves every time in our life.

Quite often people would ask how we could win a battle against ourselves? There is no secret weapon to do that. The most important point is we have to clearly know ourselves in detail, such as who we are, what we are, what we can and what we cannot. The better we know ourselves the better chance we will have to beat ourselves. I like myself for the simple reason of that 'myself' always helps me get stronger and stronger in spirit and smarter and smarter in my mind.

追问

Amazing I want to bring to you my knees. Thank you very much . and I will try everyday,everyn

ight , everymorning

when i arrive at high rank. I want to enter into conversation with you. Thank you for your help

追答

You are welcome. wish you all the best!

Answer 4

2.2. also --- and also
3. improve in --- improve
4. enemy that it's myself --- enemy. That is myself
5. usually --- often
7. ourself --- ourselves
8. Not only you can --- Not only can you
9. also --- and also
10. success your life --- succeed in your life
11. ourself --- ourselves
12. it has no --- there is no
13. find yourself --- find it yourself
14. it help --- it helps赞同0| 评论