Question

帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词

Hello everyone. I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben. One person is very forgetful, Who is he? He is Mr. Forgetful. He has a dog, he calls it ben. ben always say:"Mr. forgetful is a good man, but he isn’t a good master.” Because he forget give ben breakfast every day. Odie and ben are good friends.Odie visited ben's room. Mr. forgetful didn‘t give ben breakfast again. Ben can't bear that. He wants to give Mr. forgetful a lesson. Ben leaves home.he wants let’s Mr.forgetful know he is angry. Mr.fogetful can’t find ben.He goes to Lost and Found Office.A girl greets him in the office.Mr.forgerful give her a photo of ben.The girl put photos into the window. Odie and ben pass the Lost and Found Office.Ben sees photo his own. He know Mr.forgetful is looking for him.He goes home happily.but Mr.forgert calls him odie.Ben has nothing to say. 就是这篇

Answer 1

Because
he
forget
give
ben
breakfast
every
day.
改为
---because
he
forgets
giving
ben
breakfast
every
day.
he
wants
let’s
Mr.forgetful
know
he
is
angry.
改为-----he
wants
to
make
Mr.Forgetful
know
he
is
angry.
Mr.forgerful
give
her
a
photo
of
ben.
改为---Mr.forgerful
gives
her
a
photo
of
ben.
The
girl
put
photos
into
the
window
改为--The
girl
puts
the
photo
on
the
window
Ben
sees
photo
his
own
改为---Ben
sees
photo
of
his
own
然后就没什么问题了，但是如果你是在讲故事的话，
全文
都应该用过去
时态
，但是现在这个样子也不能说你的错的。。