Question

大家帮忙看看这个英语故事有没有语法错误一定要正确的..谢谢

A wolf had been badly wounded by dogs. He lay sick and maimed in his lair. He felt very hungry and thirsty. When a sheep passed by, he asked him to fetch some water from the stream. "If you bring me the water," he said, "I will find means to get some food." "Yes," said the sheep, "if I bring you the water, you would undoubtedly make me your food."
一只狼被狗所咬，伤势很严重，痛苦地躺在巢穴里，不能外出觅食。他感到又饿又渴，这时，他看见一只羊，便请求他到附近的小河里为他取一点水来。“你给我一点水解渴”，他说，“我就能自己去寻找食物了。”“是呀”，羊回答说，“如果我给你送水喝，那么我就会成为你的食物。”

另外，“这告诉我们，谎言是经不起推敲的，它很容易被人们识破。”用英语这样对吗？This tells us that the lie is not deliberated, it is very easy to be seen through.

Answer 1

3个错误：
1、This tells us that the lie is not deliberated,”this“改为"it"，"is not deliberated"改为"is not deliberated"
2、 it is very easy to be seen through."seen through"改为"penetrate"
如果是see through的话，就不对，英文里没有这样的讲法。

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"is not deliberated"改为"is not deliberated"？？ 麻烦你了，一定要对的...

追答

不好意思打错了，改为won't stand close scrutiny

Answer 2

他看见一只羊（经过）

其他基本都可以了，翻译不必逐句一字扣一句，但是要通顺

Answer 3

我觉得很对！

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那我翻译的句子也对吗？一定要对的..