Question

有English高手可以帮我看一下这段话里的语法错误吗?

Desert climate is usually in the places with deserts. Usually it is in Asia,Africa and Australia. For example,the Sahara Desert in the north of Africa and the Great Sandy Desert in the middle of Australia.
In a desert climate ,it is usually very very hot and dry during the day. There's no enough water. The hotest and the driest places are in desert climate. No plants or animals can live in there except cactus and camels.
The warm temperate climate is usually in Asia, North America and the places which are far away from the sea. For example: Northeast of China, Siberia area Alaska and Canada.
In the area with a warm temperate climate,it is very hot during the day and very cold at night. The area doesn't have a lot of rain each year, less than 300mm.
是帮我看一下有没有语法错误,不是翻译。大哥，这个是我自己写的啊…………

Answer 1

你好，让我来告诉你最正确的答案吧：沙漠气候通常是在有沙漠的地方出现，通常是在亚州、非州和澳大利亚。例如：萨哈拉沙漠就在非州北部，奥大利亚中部的大沙漠。沙漠的气候，白天都是非常非常地热，而且干燥。那里严重缺水。沙漠气候使得这些地方变得最热，最干燥。在大沙漠里除了仙人掌和骆驼外，没有任何生物能存活下来。而温暖的气候通常是在亚州、北美和一些远离海洋的地区，例如：中国东北，西伯利亚地区，阿拉斯加和加拿大，在这些地方，气候都是比较温暖的，通常是白天热，到了晚上就变冷了。这些地区每年的降雨量不多，而且都不足300毫米。懂了吧~

Answer 2

我是个高中生,不一定能找对..试试吧
1. in the places 定冠词the可以不要
2. In a desert climate 为啥要 In 我想不通
3. it is usually very very hot 这里it不需要 前半句已经有主语desert climate,不要用it指代
4. plants or animals 我认为 or 改成 and 更好
5. 这一整句 In the area with a warm temperate climate,it is very hot during the day and very cold at night. 和我前面讲的 2 3 个错误一样 In 和 it 都不要

应该还有些错误没找出来...

Answer 3

两个For examples的句子不完整。最后一句的单复数跟前一个句子不相对。