Question

帮忙翻译一小段话，一定不要机器翻译，好的话再追加。谢谢！！

越地道和简洁越好。也不一定每个点都包含，但意思越准确越好。谢谢！就是下面这一段：

“随着交谈，我和她慢慢熟悉起来，她也不像最初的时候那样拘谨，并开始向我讲述她的家庭。她的爸爸妈妈在她很小时就离了婚，母亲组建了新的家庭，而她则随着爸爸生活。五岁那年，父亲为了挣钱去了遥远的城市，一年、有时甚至两、三年才能回家一次，一次只能呆10天左右，每当临近父亲出发的日子，心里总是充满了不舍。这十年间，她主要和奶奶住在一起。白天她要走很远的山路去学校，放学回家后还要帮奶奶干农活。这和我在北京幸福的生活真是太不一样了！
还是不够地道和简洁啊……感觉比较Chinglish……希望大家帮帮忙！！

Answer 1

As our conversation moved on, we got more familiar with each other, and she was not so reserved as before, and began to talk about her family. Her father and mother got divorced when she was still very young. Her mom started a new family while she moved in with her father. When she was five years old, her father had to go to faraway cities to work and didn't come home until one year, two years, or even three years later. When her father came back, he only stayed for 10 days. Then she had to hold her tears and say goodbye as her father set off to the city again. During the past ten years, she lived with her grandma. She had to walk to a long distance among the mountains to get to school and help grandma with farm work after school. Compare her life with my happy life in Beijing, what a huge difference!

Answer 2

With the conversation goes, she and I become familiar. She is not overcautious as the beginning and begins to tell me her family. Her parents divorced when she was a child.Her mother built a new family and she lived with her father. When she was five years old, her father went to a distant city to earn money. He came back home every one year, sometimes even two or three years and he can only stay 10 days or so every time. She was so reluctant to let her father go when he would leave.During the past ten years,she mainly lived with her
grandmother.In the daytime,she had to go a long mountain road to school on foot and help her grandmother with farm work after
school.It is totally different fom my happy life in Beijing.