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Theshowwason.Itisdarkinthecinema.Oneoftheaudience(观众)gotup,movingalongtherowofseatsan... The show was on.It is dark in the cinema.One of the audience(观众)got up,moving along the row of seats and went to the smoke-room.A few minutes late he returned back and asked the man was sitting at the head of the row.
"Excuse me, was it our foot that I stepped when I going out a moment ago?""Yes,"the man said,"but it doesn't matter.It didn't hurt at all."
"Oh,I know you would forgive me , I ask only because I wanted to make surely whether this is my row."
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The show was on.It is(时态,改was) dark in the cinema.One of the audience(复数audiences) got up,moving along the row of seats and went to the smoke-room.A few minutes late(用later) he returned back(重复,returned和back) and asked the man (加who,定语从句少引导词)was sitting at the head of the row.
"Excuse me, was it our(人称代词错误,用my) foot that I stepped (加on)when I going(时态,用went) out a moment ago?""Yes,"the man said,"but it doesn't matter.It didn't hurt at all."
"Oh,I know you would forgive me , I ask only because I wanted(事态,用want) to make surely(短语mare sure) whether this is my row."
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The show was on.It is(was) dark in the cinema.One of the audience(观众)got up,moving along the row of seats and went to the smoke-room(smoking room).A few minutes late(later) he returned back (去掉back)and asked the man (who)was sitting at the head of the row.
"Excuse me, was it our (your)foot that I (had)stepped when I (was)going out a moment ago?""Yes,"the man said,"but it doesn't matter.It didn't hurt at all."
"Oh,I know you would forgive me , I ask only because I wanted (want)to make surely(sure) whether this is my row."
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The show was on.It is(WAS) dark in the cinema.One of the audience got up,moving along the row of seats and went to the smoke-room(SMOKING ROOM).A few minutes late (LATER) he returned(CAME) back and asked the man was(去掉WAS) sitting at the head of the row.
"Excuse me, was it your foot that I stepped (ON) when I going(WENT) out a moment ago?""Yes,"the man said,"but it doesn't matter.It didn't hurt at all."
"Oh,I know you would forgive me , I ask only because I wanted(WANT) to make surely (SURE) whether(IF) this is my row."
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1 It is dark 改为it was dark
2 audience改为 audiences
3 A few minutes late 改为A few minutes later
4 returned back 去掉back
5 the man was sitting 去掉was
6 was it our 改为 was it your
7 when I going out 改为when I went out
8 it doesn't matter 改为it didn't matter
9 I ask only because 改为I asked only because
10 make surely 改为make sure
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late later
第三行在was前加who
foot feet
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