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英语翻译高手请进!!!

电脑和我
在电脑里藏着两个小精灵，一个叫小电，另一个叫小脑，也可以叫他俩电脑。说起我和电脑，还有一段难忘的经历呢！
一天我上网遨游时刚好遇到了小电和小脑，他俩说要带我去玩。我们首先去逛“商店”，然后又带我去欣赏音乐，最后我们来到了游乐场所。我看到了一匹很漂亮的白色“木马”，就想起了小电和小脑对我的告诫：“看到有”木马”的地方千万不能去！”但是，好奇心始终战胜了理智，我骑上了那匹“木马”。突然，一束强烈的光使我睁不开眼睛，我拼命叫着小电和小脑，然后，就不醒人事了……
当我醒来的时候，听见一声温柔的叫声。我惺忪的睁开眼睛，却只看见了小电和小脑。他们给我一串泪珠项链，说它是电脑皇后给我的。有了它，谁也不能伤害我。我笑了……
这就是电脑和我的一次难忘的历险。

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Answer 1

Computer with me
Hide two elfs in the computer, 1 are a small electricity, another call cerebellum, can also call his pair computer.Speak of me with computer, also have an unforgettable career!
A day I get to the Internet to roam about at pleasure met small electricity and cerebellum at the right moment, his a pair said that takes me to play.We stroll "store" first, then take me to appreciate music again, we arrived at to play place finally.I come in sight of a very beautiful white"wood horse", reminded of small electricity and cerebellum to warn me:"See have" wood horse"of the place ten million can't go!"But, the curiosity won always rational, I rode to ascend that"wood horse".Suddenly, a bunch of mightiness makes me can not open eyes only, I try very hard to call small electricity and cerebellum, then, lose all consciousness ……
When I wake up of time, hear a gentle and soft interjection.I open eyes shadowily, but saw small electricity and cerebellum.They give me a string of drop of tear necklace, saying it is a computer the empress give mine.Had it, who can't hurt me, either.I smiled ……
This is the computer with my an unforgettable go through dangers.

Answer 2

我觉得小电和小脑
应该是把computer这个词拆开 com 和 puter
然后再修饰一下变成精灵的名字
比如 commy 和 puter...

呵呵 童心泛滥了
顶一下

Answer 3

楼上的翻译得不错,虽然不完全是很标准的英语,不过看楼主的意思和这个文章,估计足够了的