Question

请高手帮忙看下翻译里的语法错误及用词不当等问题，很久没接触英语了，问题可能多多，谢谢了

Hello，Everybody！I am an student studying in the foster talent to test primary school（育才实验小学，不知道翻译对不-_-///）.
The historical clock has already entered in 2008, was away from in August on 8 this great time to be more and more near（历史的时钟已经进入了2008年，距离8月8日这个伟大的时刻越来越近了）. As a Chinese, my mood is becoming more and more excited, I think frequently, what we will be supposed to make in the future 152 days and nights for the Olympic Games?
First I should study Olympic Games knowledge, understand the spirit that the Olympic Games young hero strives for success. I should remember the time Uncle Xu Haifeng at the Los Angeles Olympic Games wins first gold medal, remember Uncle Wang Yifu eject the last gun at the Sydney Olympic Games, remember each athlete's sweat and endeavor, and use the spirit strives for success in my study life, do not fear the difficulty, complete each matter earnestly!
Then, I also should practice English, when the Olympic Games begin, I can exchange with friends come from all corners of the country, tell our Beijing, our Olympic Games to them. I will do my best to be an Olympic Games young messenger.
Once more, I must cherish the environment, let the sky bluer and water cleaner in Hangzhou in 2008. Starts from me, not randomly take out rubbish and disposed of it classifiedly; I will use electricity frugal and protect our precious resources; I will cherish the flowers and plants trees, participate in the tree-planting activity positively; I also will tell each person by me, our Olympic Games should be green Olympic Games!
152 days and nights is too short, I also have many many matter to want to do, but I knew so long as we pay diligently, so long as we grow health, we may proudly say: I have made the contributions towards 2008 Beijing Olympic Games!
谢谢帮忙修改啊！！

Answer 1

错多了，改完如下：

Hello，Everybody！I am a student studying in the Yucai primary school. With the enterance into 2008, we are getting closer and closer to the historical date of 8th August. As a Chinese citizen, I feel more and more excited, and keep wondering what we can do for the Olympic Games in the next 152 days and nights?

Firstly, I'd love to learn from the young Olympic heros, who strive for success. I shall never forget the time when Mr Xu Haifeng won the first gold medal in Los Angeles, never forget Mr Wang Yifu ejecting the last shot in Sydney, and never forget each athlete's sweat and endeavor. I shall equip myself with such striving spirit in my life, never fear any difficulties, and finish everything earnestly!

Secondly, I shall practise my English, to become a young Olympic propagator, publicizing the Games and the Beijing city to friends from allover the world when the Olympic Games begin.

Finally, I shall cherish our environment, keep the sky blue and water clean in Hangzhou in 2008. Starting from myself, I will not throw rubbish anywhere but categorize it, I will use electricity frugally and protect our precious resources. I will cherish flowers and trees, and participate in tree-planting activites. I will also tell everyone around me, that our Olympic Games will be the greenest Olympic Games!

152 days and nights are too short, and I have many many things to do. But I know so long as we pay diligently, so long as we grow health, (这句没看懂什么意思) I can proudly say: I contribute to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games!

Answer 2

Hello，Everybody！I am a student studying in a primary school for talented students
The historical clock has already entered 2008, coming nearer and nearer to August 8 ,the great moment .
As a Chinese, I am becoming more and more excited, I frequently think of what we will be supposed to do to make the future 152 days and nights for the Olympic Games?
First I should study the knowledgeabout the Olympic Games , understand the spirit that the Olympic young heroes strive for success. I should remember the time when Uncle Xu Haifeng won the first gold medal at Los Angeles Olympic Games , remember Uncle Wang Yifu shot the last gun at Sydney Olympic Games, remember each athlete's sweats and endeavor, and use the spirit to strive for success in my study life. I will not fear the difficulty, and will complete each task earnestly!
Then, I should also practice English, and so when the Olympic Games begin, I can exchange ideas with friends coming from all corners of the world, tell them about Beijing, and our Olympic Games . I will do my best to be an Olympic young messenger.

Once more, I must cherish the environment, make the sky bluer and water cleaner in Hangzhou in 2008. Starting from me,do not take out rubbish and dispose it freelt; I will use electricity frugal and protect our precious resources; I will cherish the flowers and plant trees, participate in the tree-planting activity positively; I will also tell each person around me, our Olympic Games should be green Olympic Games!
152 days and nights is too short, I also have many many tarks to do, but I knew so long as we play diligently, so long as we grow healthy, we may proudly say: I have made contributions to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games!