Question

大家帮我写一篇英语作文。8年级上册的【仁爱版的】题目：My favorite sport 80~100字单词。急需、急急急。

作文要求：1、What spots do you like？
2、What‘s your favorite sport？Why？主要介绍自己最喜欢的运动并介绍为什么喜欢

3、How often do you do it？
4、Who is your favorite player？Why?
1.我喜欢骑自行车 2.我最喜欢溜冰 3.一周两次 4.我喜欢的运动员是刘翔
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Answer 1

I am a middle school girl. I have many hobbies such as cycling , skating ,swimming and so on . But my favorite sport is skating . In winter I go skating twice a week. Because i think skating can make me relaxed . What's more ,skating looks like a beautiful dance.When I am skating ,I feel like a free and cheerful dancer at the ball. I also think skating can not only bring me pleasure and beauty but it can also build my body. My favourite athlete is Liuxiang because he is great in many aspects.

追问

可不可以分段一下啊 里面有的单词我们还没交呢 有80个单词么

追答

大约一百词，我可以把较难的词做一下改动，但这篇不应该分段的。
I am a middle school girl. I have many hobbies such as cycling , skating ,swimming and so on . But my favorite sport is skating . In winter I go skating twice a week. Because i think skating can make me relaxed（改为healthy） . What's more (而且),skating looks like a beautiful dance.When I am skating ,I feel like a free and cheerful dancer . I also think skating can not only bring me pleasure and beauty but it can also build my body. My favourite athlete is Liuxiang （改为I like Liuxiang best）because he is great .这们这篇文章就不难了。

追问

嗯 我会考虑看看的 行的话 必定选你

Answer 2

来自团队开心英语角的小幽ice：你的文章不错，但有的地方改一下会更好：

I am a middle school girl.
I have many hobbies such as cycling , skating ,swimming and so on . such as 不能和so on连用。

But my favorite sport is skating . But 没必要加

In winter I go skating twice a week. 最好用 I usually go sketing twice a week in winter.

Because i think skating can make me relaxed（改为healthy） . because 不能单独成一个句子。

What's more (而且),skating looks like a beautiful dance. What's more 不能在句子开头。

When I am skating ,I feel like a free and cheerful dancer .

I also think skating can not only bring me pleasure and beauty but it can also build my body.
。。。。but it can also build 用法有误，应为but also build...

My favourite athlete is Liuxiang （改为I like Liuxiang best）because he is great .这们这篇文章就不难了。

追问

那你认为分段好么 你可以整理一下好么 需要改动的整理一下 蟹蟹

Answer 3

My favorite sport
I like playing sports very much. My favorite sport is riding a bike, because it's relaxing. I often play it two or three times a week .And my favorite player is Liu Xiang.

Answer 4

there are many kinds sports that I enjoys, such as swimming, riding bicycle, and skating. that sport I like most is skating.skating gives me fine to think. sometimes life can get rather busy. i found that on my skate i have time to destress, think and have a way to stay with myself. it is pretty good. i play skate twice every week.my favorite player is liuxiang.He does well in running . In the 2004 Olympic Game, he won a golden medal . He is famous as a running sportsman.