Question

急求一篇英文的书面表达

书面表达：
根据提示写一篇60-80词的短文。 假设你是王芳，你班昨天开了一次关于网上购物的主题班会。请结合下表的内容，用英语给某英文报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
一些同学赞同的原因：
⒈方便
⒉24小时营业，随时可购物
⒊便宜
一些同学反对的原因：
⒈网店仅给出商品的照片
⒉不能检查质量
⒊不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣
Key words:convenient,at any time,be open,cheap,on-line shops,goods,check,quality,enjoy
开头：
Dear editor,
We had a discussion about shopping on-line at the class meeting yesterday.
Some of us think……
请结合开头和以上的信息写一封英文信。求文～～～～
急求

Answer 1

Dear editor,

We had a discussion about shopping on-line at the class meeting yesterday.

Some of us think that it is beneficial to our life as it is convenient. On-line shops are also available for the whole day, thus we are able to shop whenever we want. The products sold on an on-line shop are also relatively cheaper than normal.

However, the rest think that the products sold on on-line shops are unreliable as we can only examine the item by photos and we are unable to check the quality of the product. By shopping on on-line shops, we also loses the joy of shopping with our friends.

In conclusion, we feel that on-line shopping is not beneficial as even though it may be cheap, the quality of the product may not be worthy of the price. People tend to also regret when they receive the items they ordered from on-line shops as the items have a vast difference compared to the photo. Therefore, we disagree that on-line shopping is beneficial to our life.

Yours faithfully,
Wang Fang

行吗？我不太清楚你要的格式。